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Shadow-Storm
Just thought I'd give writing this kind of thing a go. May write more depending on how well this goes
Shadow-Storm
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That was so hot~~~
This was pretty solid for a first time. I thought Flash's orgasm was a little stale but you did bother to take the time to properly set up the scenario which was greatly appreciated. Many are usually in too much of a hurry to get to the action. The dialogue wasn't too cheesy or obnoxious either, which is something even vets can have issues with. Again, a real good start with hopes of more to come.
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Yeab flash is going to die if Shining was piss enough to break his noise by catching him ass grabbing the kids gonna be castraited finding out her had sex with his wife also a big error you write did not kill i think you ment killed like last time
Good set up but there are some grammar issues.
Awesome hope you continue this.
Very very nice any chance of a sequel?
9717849 Maybe
LET THERE BE A SEQUEL!!!
I'm gonna turn into an English teacher and say there were quite a few spelling errors but overall the story was fantastic!
9790089 Out of all the languages I know, English is not my best.
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I apologize if I came off as rude. It wasn't my intention. Seriously though, the story was absolutely fantastic! Wonderful plot!
I want a sequel too, maybe where Twilight finally decides to go all the way and talks to Cadance about it and they both tag team Flash.
9790358 It's cool. Honestly, I know I suck at grammar and stuff like that.
I know where you got this inspiration from...and why are you not updating anymore of your stories! I NEED MOAR!
I love this, I need more.
9993903 10044657 He's been banned.
10193188
Why?
10195045 Don't ask.
10195048
I don't want to make irrational assumptions, so why was he banned?You can PM me if you don't want it to go public.Nevermind, found it on his profile.
This was awesome I hope there will be a sequel one day
Quite good. Though Flash being the best sex she’d ever had may have been too much of a stretch. Kind of hard to suspend that much disbelief.
But I do want to see a sequel, though, featuring three things:
- Cadance with Shining (got to fuck him at least once to pass the next baby off as his, right?)
- Twi with Flash, ‘making him feel better’ because she feels bad about what her brother did.
- Cadance with Flash again, thus time right behind Twi & Shining’s backs. Bonus points if they get caught. Double bonus points if Twi catches them and then joins in!