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I was just thinking about this story the other day
An update later is better then an update never.
I'll admit, it took me a good minute to remember what this story was about. Good to see you're still playing to update it. If you start updating regularly (ie, more often than once a year), you might find people coming back to the story. For me, you're back on my tracking list.
So happy for another chapter keep it up
Noice. fun surprise to see a new chapter.
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A ok it a world of free expression of love with lower boundries, got it. Thanks for the clarification
Nice
Is lily ever going to get a tour? Or did she already and it just wasn't mentioned?
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She has not.
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Makes sense, yeah. I was mostly curious too because those races are also closer to his anatomy even if he doesn't realized so I was under the illusion that some dormant instinct might wake up or increase if a cat or a dog give him google eyes.
Also you can always go the genetics route. Some ladies are more develop than others, even ponies. Wouldn't be funny if that is like Toon logic? there are creatures that are actually like D size but their fur cover it up and flat them out until they get excited?
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I’ve got that trick stored away for the dragons 😉. As a homage to an old comic I used to read that has slowed down in updates.
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Nice!
Well that was certantly a rollercoster. Also poor Rarity, seems like she had a royal fetish of some sort. Too bad by law Cid can only marry two mares and they most be royals as established by law.
Why would they want to disappear him whenever the bearers came around? unless they dont want Twilight to comment on his similarity to the creatures through the mirror.
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I think i know the comic you are talking about. I haven't seen the comic for at least a decade. and thinking about it still makes me chuckle.
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My thought was basically that his job is to “protect” Celestia, keep an eye on her back while she’s focusing on whatever’s in front of her. When Celestia’s with the element bearers, she doesn’t necessarily need the extra eyes since Twilight and her friends are probably the most capable fighters in Equestria, so to speak. So she lets her personal guard have the day off since they’re rendered a mute point in the presence of twilight and her friends.
But the thought does give me a possible idea in the future. I wasn’t really going to include the existence of Equestria Girls; but I’m starting to for a grasp of how I could introduce it without it’s existence throwing the story out the window.
Hooray! Its alive!
Aw, I ran out of chapters.
It's spelled "yeah" not "yea". You have done this in every chapter.
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Next chapter is being worked on. It is slow; like a hundred words a week unless I get engrossed into a thought.
Thank you for notifying me about the spelling issue. I didn't realize there was a difference between the two spellings of the word. They've all been fixed.
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Glad to hear it's not dead! And thanks for fixing the yeah/yea.
If you'd like an editor hit me up.
Noice. That was some amusing slander. And the mom's reaction made my eyebrow raise. Honestly, I thought Celestia would be more appreciative of ponies who can stand up to her like that.
Celeatia's attitude towards Cinnamon's parents feels... detached, like she's going through a routine that's she done a thousand times before. In fact, she's mostly the same way towards Cinnamon himself. "Not giving special treatment over past consorts" is really cold when you're talking about the one that holds your heart. To me, it really does sound like she's still trying to remain distant, whether or not she's aware of it. At least Luna seems to be trying to push Cinnamon into dragging her sister out of Princess mode, no matter how slow his progress is.
Well, sadly I'm up to date, I do enjoy this story but there are a few errors, you use Short, Straight and Sharp Cut as the tailors name so it's very inconsistent, also
"he would only have seconds to access the situation"
Assess the situation
"Ground Cinnamon is a castle guard and, and one point"
Used and rather than at
"waiving this in my face"
waving
"That’s now what we heard"
not
"He helped built up some of my confidence "
Build
"being the first no notice his absence."
to notice
I've really been enjoying this story, love the premise of the MC having been in Equestria basically all his life and being raised by ponies as well as Celestias courtship court
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What comic if you don't mind my asking?
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Thanks for all those catches! All fixed!
I’m also shocked about the Straight/Short/Sharp issue. My sporadic way of writing must’ve caused it but I also must’ve been in a rush to send the chapter out. I’m really surprised I didn’t catch that.
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The comic’s called here there be dragons
4 chapters and they’re still making progress on the 4th. Slow, but progress.
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Horse dude with a cursed dong nails a bunch of dragonesses.
it's called Here There Be Dragons. it's as much comedy as it is porn.
Patiently waiting marvel-b1-cdn.bc0a.com/f00000000039764/www1.cbn.com/sites/default/files/styles/image_xl_640x480/public/coffee-window-man_si.jpg?itok=1ALlnNLo
One speaker per paragraph.
Two instances of not doing this: