Oh! And please be sure to have Double Spaced in your Formatting options! Makes the reading easier on the eyes.

Please don't take this the wrong way, but, uh, why can't you just write the story so that it's double spaced from the start?

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So I formatted my Microsoft Word so that it has custom presets. This unfortunate happening is due to writing endlessly for college. I started typing the first few chapters with this not in mind, uploaded the chapters, and then realized I put myself into a hole.

Sorry for the inconvenience.

... not going to lie my dudes but this chapter was literally retarded, and I have no idea what it's taking about.

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everything was easy to understand for me. maybe the chapter isn't what's retarded?

so far I've enjoyed the story

That being said, this is a small peeve that a lot of authors tend to make I've noticed.. It's Sapience not Sentience in the context that your explaining..
to use a bit from the start Animals would fall under Sentience while Rulers as you put it, would fall under Sapience

You see it, time and time again, you watch them. These sentient creatures, they start from nothing, but build themselves empires. Communities are built upon unity, and united, cities form, countries are founded, and worlds are established. But who governs them? Who are the leaders of these united colonies? It is the creatures of sentience, they rule over one another. This begs the question: does it matter how a colony is ruled?

in this paragraph Sentience would actually be the incorrect term to use past perhaps the beginning of the paragraph as it would be Sapient beings that form those communities and rule over one another

like I said just a small peeve but I like to address it when I see it

anyway keep up the good work otherwise as I'll be reading this one over the next couple days as it's not often you get decent writing and some pics with the long fic stories