A syndrome is always troublesome. It inconveniences you and anypony else around you, Twilight learns the hard way of how to cope with an odd syndrome that causes her boobs to grow to an enormous size. Surely there is a cure right?
“Yeah good idea, and speaking of… you called me Rarity while you were doing me,” Twilight teases recalling which makes Spike turn fully red in embarrassment and having been caught red handed. “You were fantasizing about fucking Rarity weren’t you?” Twilight presses before Spike quickly bolts for the door too embarrassed to be seen now that he has been found out. Leaving Twilight all alone still confused as to what happened to her.
Yes, because the strange thing is that he called you Rarity, not because he just fucked his sister/mother figure on the map table.
9679613 Thank you for this comment. I think Spike banging Twilight while thinking of Rarity the whole time sounds pretty fucked up, so I'm just not going to read this story or like/dislike it.
This is a mess, grammatically speaking. You have spelling errors, run-on sentences, multiple speakers in one paragraph, and more.
My advice? Find an editor, send your work to them for proofreading, and take their suggestions to heart. This is barely readable in its current state.
As for the 'plot'... well, it's a clopfic, so plot is secondary. May I make a suggestion, though? Rather than 'Sudden Big Tiddy Syndrome', the true scientific term should be 'Sudden Onset Macromastia'. Macromastia is a real condition, an abnormal swelling of breast tissue beyond normal proportions. 'Sudden Onset' refers to a symptom that appears with little to no warning.
9680365 This commission is based on a series of Images that the artist Suirano drew and named called Sudden big tiddie so that's why I paid homage to it in the title
9680357 Oh. Well if there was never even the slightest bit of romance or love between Twilight and Spike the first time they ever had sex, then I guess that could be pretty funny.
“No I’ve looked everywhere. I thought we alphabetize these last week?” she says looking at him.
finding ‘Anon’s Bizarre adventure’ and ‘One Kick Stallion’(—— instead of the book I am looking for,” she mentions starting to now change her search to a different shelf.
closing his manga book and andto go read his book elsewhere with Twilight unaware he even left.
things that seemed like curses but were easily explained in the end.
to show princess Celestia that I can fix things aside from friendships
Basically from what I know is a client who is a regular of Tina’s recently
“Ugh I don’t see the problem here aside from this big butted ho stealing my customers,(——” Tiddie Tina spits.
Yes, because the strange thing is that he called you Rarity, not because he just fucked his sister/mother figure on the map table.
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Nah, that's just hot.
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Thank you for this comment. I think Spike banging Twilight while thinking of Rarity the whole time sounds pretty fucked up, so I'm just not going to read this story or like/dislike it.
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It was meant as a joke
This is a mess, grammatically speaking. You have spelling errors, run-on sentences, multiple speakers in one paragraph, and more.
My advice? Find an editor, send your work to them for proofreading, and take their suggestions to heart. This is barely readable in its current state.
As for the 'plot'... well, it's a clopfic, so plot is secondary. May I make a suggestion, though? Rather than 'Sudden Big Tiddy Syndrome', the true scientific term should be 'Sudden Onset Macromastia'. Macromastia is a real condition, an abnormal swelling of breast tissue beyond normal proportions. 'Sudden Onset' refers to a symptom that appears with little to no warning.
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Besides, there's always "Sharing is Caring". In more ways than one.
Also, I see Spike screwing Twilight first, I tag. It's a man of culture thing.
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This commission is based on a series of Images that the artist Suirano drew and named called Sudden big tiddie so that's why I paid homage to it in the title
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Oh. Well if there was never even the slightest bit of romance or love between Twilight and Spike the first time they ever had sex, then I guess that could be pretty funny.
Still not my cup o' tea, though.
>reads chapter title
>is reminded of this
>chuckles
Oh, that terrible ligma. I hear it's testicular.
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Agreed, it's bad enough that I couldn't read past the first triple space.
Oh boy. What's next for Spike and Twilight? Spell going to affect Rarity and they have a threesome?
Loved reading this!~ hope to see more soon~
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I mean it does say incomplete... could mean there is more
This is intriguing, hope there's going to be more
Boner Garage?
Keep going. I hope Spike will be involved a lot more.
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Why am I the only one to like your comment so far?
People are idiots.
Uhh why is the manager a freaking alicorn?