• Member Since 16th Nov, 2012
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Brony-wan-kenobi


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Unf... great twincest story.

Well that was different and exciting! You can imagine how dry reading can become w/o some spice. I'm glad this was able to shake things up a bunch.
I'm a little disappointed it didn't end with a walk-in by somepone

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Honestly, I thought that might be too predictable. Plus, if people liked this enough, the open ending would have allowed for a sequel

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I actually cut my last comment short. I'm currently on mobile. Forgive.
Before I forget I wanted to comment that I found the descriptors of pumpkins posture to be confusing.
I couldn't figure out what pose she was in throughout the text.
First thought lay on back bc specific text.
Second thought was on knees spread bc forward/back bj.
Last thought was on side 1 leg up and retracted like pinup bc pound watch.
Was very confusing had to shove to back of mind to ignore and enjoy

Again sry for writing

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