A young man driven to insanity wants revenge on the ones who betrayed him
No offense, but the chapter felt a bit rushed along with there being some grammar errors. If you like, I could become your editor and help you pace the story a little better along with fixing any grammar errors.
nice work
I would accept good offer
This story is a collection of run-on sentences.
How is it their fault?
No offense, but the chapter felt a bit rushed along with there being some grammar errors. If you like, I could become your editor and help you pace the story a little better along with fixing any grammar errors.
nice work
I would accept good offer
This story is a collection of run-on sentences.
How is it their fault?