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What an intense battle! You really did going all out with this one while trying to stay close to the canon. Good job, sir.
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it greatly warms my heart to hear that. I actually wanted to add a lot more and have Asta get really hurt and have Ed step in them I thought, Ed always says he steps in when he needs to but he won't always be there. This time he didn't even though he knew Asta wouldn't win in the end but he wanted to see if his brother would just give up after being hit with news like that but he pushed on and prove he can do things on his own
great chapter and a epic major fight with a big bad that is fucking thing up that he shouldn't and greatly moving events forward being pushed back by the wall named Asta now he will wake up surrounded by girls again and hopefully Noelle can act on her emotions for Asta lets hope we can move closer to the appearance of sunset soon can't think of when she will show but i really can't see her with fragment so it must be some where else i can't wait to see the coming chapters
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sunset will be making a brief appearance in the next chapter but she will be with fragment, though I can say she wont be happy about it. Fragment as of now is helping the group, at the same time he has s own agenda. Hint did anyone ever once read a part where he activated his grimoire?
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i put together that he is a entity that is merged together from random-ish pieces some where and got his power from there not a grimoire hell a piece of him could it self be a part of a grimoire this is inside him maybe a 5 leaf one with a demon of its own hence his mind set and motives also reason he has (demon magic) not 100% on that thought but it is my best guess in how fragment formed and i can just see that fragment in this story will have something to do with sunsets demon form in some way due to said (demon magic) he used to fight Asta
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Your theorem is partially correct . His magic is his own due to where he as born and what he is. As for the grimoire, he just doesn’t have one. As for Sunset, she’s just a means to an end really. She did play a role in his being there but for sake of the story i can’t say
I loved the introduction of fragment and how u made stronger than Asta and how Asta didn't beat just because he got a power up I look forward to what else fragment can do
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it is a good thing i can see some what on how things are forming and see how things will progress a little bit can't wait to see what's next and Asta is going to have to do another getting better section though i can say there is quite a few girls jumping for his attention but they will have to go through twilight to join the fun and maybe go through the portal later it's ramping up for some interesting things and fragment is makin things go some what off course but not totally lets see where this will go hope to see it soon the twitchiness is back for more
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Oh, Fragment has full knowledge of how things are supposed to go in the main storyline just as Asta does, but unlike Asta he's working things out for his own means, not just so he can get to Equestria. Because of Asta's interference with the timeline, there are things that he didn't anticipate changing like Sunset's involvement but he is working them towards his own advancements. It's safe to say Fragment is currently the most powerful mage in this world of Black Clover. Even the current wizard king wouldn't be able to fight on par with him due to not only his moral code but also because if he did get a grimoire his magic would b that much more powerful threat to just about everything.
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well lets wait and see how they over come this hill/mountain in the coming chapters and see what happen during Asta's recovery and funny thing i thought to do a stan lee reference like how will our hero's over such and such from the animated series lol i think thats where it's from DAMN YOU BRAIN FARTS!!!!! lol