Yeah not going to lie but reading fics were Spike is only being shipped with only the mane six over and over again is getting kinda boring, so something like this is a breath of fresh air and I really wish we get more rare Spike ships, I do remember seeing quite a few of them a while back but now a days not so much.
9604236 I just noticed that I couldn't find any with him and Songbird, so I made one, I can't wait to finish the story so I can find another ship that barely exists.
9604292 There is also the fan creations that have traction but not alot of stories. Like Eris, 'Daughter Of'/genderbend of Discord and Button's mom. Or if you feel lucky, Daybreaker. Most of her stories on this site are abit rapey so something abit smoother could go far.
Entire fic seems to be a run on sentence, and is hard to follow. It needs a bunch of work to fulfill it's potential, as the sentence structure and even basic spelling is just a little off. Maybe get an editor?
also presision should be Precision chrystal = crystal
It had been a special day for Songbird, the last stop on her Equestrian tour, Ponyville, the town hadn't been on the tour originally, but it'd been added as a thank you to the princess for saving them all from the Strom King, and just to give that thank you a little extra kick all tickets had been sold at a steep discount, and promptly sold out in less than a minute, something that wasn't unusual for her, she had been getting ready for the show when it happened, a monster attack out of nowhere, something that was apparently so common that the citizens of the town barely noticed it was happening, they just avoided the street the chaos was happening on and went about their day, unfortunately for her she had been on said street when the monster, a Leopard with a Snake tail and a Snake neck as long as a Giraffe, the Towns folk had silently, and with great precision left the area before the monster had gotten to close, she, on the other hand, had paniced and hid from view, by the time she realized what the town folk where doing it was too late for her to flee, she'd considered flying, but then the Snake cat had spit a stream of disolving venom verticaly down the street, and she didn't want to test its aim.
Do yourself a favor and look up "run on sentence" on google.
Yeah, I love pairing the loveable guy with new mares, too! The only problem is HOW they get together in the first place, especially without cliches like "I saw him in the croud and it was love at first sight" or "she just happened to come to the castle/Spike just happened to run into her for no reason"...
You really need to work on your editing, as run-on sentences abound. Also, your said tags need work. It's "How awesome is that?" he asked. Not "How awesome is that?" He asked. This Guide should help.
Fluttershy scares me too, Spike. She has an army of animals of varying lethality at her beck and call, all of whom ADORE her. If this woman goes off the deep end, all of Equestria is fucked.
I know this is probably over, but wanted to say still one of my favorite stories written in here. Wished I could have seen where it went. Rereading for the umpteenth time lol.
I still wonder how in the fuck she can Sia.
okay, okay, goddamn, i'll read the thing, don't lynch me
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is it bad that this made me laugh?
This isn't so bad. Has a lot of potential. :D
You have a few grammar errors though.
Okay, having read it now, I can only wonder what's to happen next. Definitely earning a track and favourite
Minor mistakes here and again, sure, but that's not stopping me lmao.
gotta write a songbird story at some point...
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Edit: Yes, about fifty/fifty I'm kidding lol
I'm onboard. I'm digging it
Mares? What about him shipping with girl dragons, griffins, hippogriffs, single ladies, etc...
I applaud you Shipping Spike with these unexplored ships, its so much fun.
Yeah not going to lie but reading fics were Spike is only being shipped with only the mane six over and over again is getting kinda boring, so something like this is a breath of fresh air and I really wish we get more rare Spike ships, I do remember seeing quite a few of them a while back but now a days not so much.
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I just noticed that I couldn't find any with him and Songbird, so I made one, I can't wait to finish the story so I can find another ship that barely exists.
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Captain Celaeno is one. Grand total of 29 fics for her here on fimfic. And most of them are not good. Same with Queen Novo.
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I'll add them to the list
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There is also the fan creations that have traction but not alot of stories. Like Eris, 'Daughter Of'/genderbend of Discord and Button's mom. Or if you feel lucky, Daybreaker. Most of her stories on this site are abit rapey so something abit smoother could go far.
This story looks good so far, but there are a few grammar mistakes
Oh Spike, you have no idea the power you hold ...
In your pants.
Entire fic seems to be a run on sentence, and is hard to follow. It needs a bunch of work to fulfill it's potential, as the sentence structure and even basic spelling is just a little off. Maybe get an editor?
also
presision should be Precision
chrystal = crystal
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none of my editors stick around long, and I can't afford to pay for one to stay around.
Both words have been fixed thank you
Do yourself a favor and look up "run on sentence" on google.
Yeah, I love pairing the loveable guy with new mares, too! The only problem is HOW they get together in the first place, especially without cliches like "I saw him in the croud and it was love at first sight" or "she just happened to come to the castle/Spike just happened to run into her for no reason"...
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yeah, the beginning really makes or breaks the story.
Another rare Spike ship eh? Hope this one actually finishes, it's a shame that so many just kinda stop.
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Hey, are you calling me out on my spike x spirit fire story? Cause I'm gonna finish it once I think of a good ending.
You really need to work on your editing, as run-on sentences abound. Also, your said tags need work. It's "How awesome is that?" he asked. Not "How awesome is that?" He asked. This Guide should help.
Fluttershy scares me too, Spike. She has an army of animals of varying lethality at her beck and call, all of whom ADORE her. If this woman goes off the deep end, all of Equestria is fucked.
This is so cliche...
...AND I LOVE IT!!!
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You ain't lyin'!
I know this is probably over, but wanted to say still one of my favorite stories written in here. Wished I could have seen where it went. Rereading for the umpteenth time lol.