Applejack and Big Macintosh both have a crush on each other.
9743014I am sorry I made you wait so long.
Pretty good so far. Small continuity error in chapter 2 though. Only AJ and Rarity were raised in Ponyville. Even if you believe Shy is the oldest of the six she wouldn't quite be old enough to be living on her own.
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There's a much larger continuity error in Chapter 3, but since this entire fic was planned before S9 aired, there's not much I can do about that.
oh hell granny caught them! whats gonna happen next? and will this take another year? find out next time!
Nice
Any chance we'll see Applejack actually pregnant in chapter 3?
I tripped and found a second chapter
Wait a minute. Was there a second chapter? I as just rereading some olden goldies. Didn't even know this had a second one.
3 years later
9743014
I am sorry I made you wait so long.
Pretty good so far. Small continuity error in chapter 2 though. Only AJ and Rarity were raised in Ponyville. Even if you believe Shy is the oldest of the six she wouldn't quite be old enough to be living on her own.
10439336
There's a much larger continuity error in Chapter 3, but since this entire fic was planned before S9 aired, there's not much I can do about that.
oh hell granny caught them! whats gonna happen next? and will this take another year? find out next time!
Nice
Any chance we'll see Applejack actually pregnant in chapter 3?
I tripped and found a second chapter
Wait a minute. Was there a second chapter? I as just rereading some olden goldies. Didn't even know this had a second one.
3 years later