No worries mate, this was a damn good chapter. I like that you didn't take the "one year later" route with a brief explanation to get the story rolling like others do. Don't run yourself ragged, dudder.
9948948 So ehh... will the MC gonna have a love interest? I bet its Cinnamon Twist and once they are teens they go gaga for each other which then evolved to consummate love at an early stage, sorry for the rant, Maybe a harem and correct me if I'm wrong, this story is set in an anthro mlp verse right or is it mlp characters as humans not equestria girls colour palette but humans with real world skin colours (tan,pale,ebony) and strange naming, ooh could you please add my pyromancer OC in your story. π€£π€π
9949256 Lots of questions, some I can't answer some I can.
So first off, the MC and all the people he's met so far have been Humans with real-life skin colors, and different color hair. And tbh all the other questions regarding the story would lead to spoilers, so sorry can't answer those, and adding OCs to the story atm I think wouldn't work, its too early to really think about stuff like that. Maybe later on when the lore of the world has been established more.
9949294 Heyπ I'll just hold you onto that, inserting my pyromancer oc to your story, damn I am so hype with this story that It finally made me published my draconequues sci-fi story, that one I know it's a rush job been working on it like 2 years give or take and just on the chapter 1 alone too sheesh, and I'll get comments about it, but between you and me and other writers, I believe comments are what really fuels us to write heh heh heh. Sorry for ranting, I am just that hyped with your story *insert crazy happy pinkie here*
9951207 Thanks for all that, I went back and did some editing. I don't have anyone that prereads these before I release them so there's bound to be mistakes.
No worries mate, this was a damn good chapter.
I like that you didn't take the "one year later" route with a brief explanation to get the story rolling like others do.
Don't run yourself ragged, dudder.
You spelled Dissuade wrong but otherwise good chapter!
*slams fist on a table* Another one!!! Submit to us the collective!!! LOL but seriously though you gotta pump out more chapters, please
9948933
really glad you're enjoying the story, I do try to pump them out as fast as time permits.
9948948
So ehh... will the MC gonna have a love interest? I bet its Cinnamon Twist and once they are teens they go gaga for each other which then evolved to consummate love at an early stage, sorry for the rant, Maybe a harem and correct me if I'm wrong, this story is set in an anthro mlp verse right or is it mlp characters as humans not equestria girls colour palette but humans with real world skin colours (tan,pale,ebony) and strange naming, ooh could you please add my pyromancer OC in your story. π€£π€π
9949256
Lots of questions, some I can't answer some I can.
So first off, the MC and all the people he's met so far have been Humans with real-life skin colors, and different color hair. And tbh all the other questions regarding the story would lead to spoilers, so sorry can't answer those, and adding OCs to the story atm I think wouldn't work, its too early to really think about stuff like that. Maybe later on when the lore of the world has been established more.
9949294
Heyπ I'll just hold you onto that, inserting my pyromancer oc to your story, damn I am so hype with this story that It finally made me published my draconequues sci-fi story, that one I know it's a rush job been working on it like 2 years give or take and just on the chapter 1 alone too sheesh, and I'll get comments about it, but between you and me and other writers, I believe comments are what really fuels us to write heh heh heh. Sorry for ranting, I am just that hyped with your story *insert crazy happy pinkie here*
Composure. A composer is a musician.
You can drop part of this sentence.
I settled in and made myself a sandwich.
9951207
Thanks for all that, I went back and did some editing. I don't have anyone that prereads these before I release them so there's bound to be mistakes.
9951600
I'll do that if you'd like.
9951603
sure if you'd like
9951617
If you'd like for a harsh proofreader, yeah... I was raised by grammar nazi...
9951620
Hell yeah brother, I try to do my best but sometimes it's just not good enough.
Also, side note, how are you liking the story?
9951624
Tis a good start! I should know, I start and stop several fanfics.
I love this story. Hope the new chapter comes soon