Well, this was a great read, really loved how Shining became more suggestively susceptible to Sombra's requests. I hope there will be more of this in the future.

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Well, I do enjoy writing MPreg Shining, so who knows?~

This isn't a criticism of your story, it just helped me realized this, but I am bit disappointed that their is more SombraxShining cheat fics than SombraxCadance. Slutty Cadance is such a common and easy kink that I am surprised there aren't more.

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Wait, really? I would've thought for sure that Cadance/Sombra was more common.

Love these kind of clopfics, amazing work as always!

I really enjoyed this prequel, and am shamelessly hopeful for more similar themes in the future.

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I thought that too, but about a year ago I decided to look for any SombraxCadance fics and found practically nothing. There were definitely a good bit of SombraxShining though. He's also usually paired with one of the other princesses or the Main 6. Cadance is unfortunately overlooked in favor of the others in general.

Does anyone know the cover artist decided to make Sombra brown and not dark grey?

I really enjoyed this prequel dude. :-)

Gotta ask, are there plans for a sequel for Hiding the Lineage?

To the author - the sexual dialogue is always top notch with you ya made me hard! and that's something i rarely admit when reading your work
the banter they have is so causal and funny like the line when sombra says to shining '' would you kindly come out of the closet''
there's an error in chapter one with shining enters sombra's bedchambers '' the prince 'couple' bitten his lip'' it's could've.

p.s: give me a link to that cover art in private. if you can find it?

It was my first reading of this kind but I must admit that I enjoyed the experience.

i really hate the doubters who said sombra wouldn't come back. Although this was a good fic (i usually love your sombring ships anyway), but when cam shining be more dom (i know it's a silly question but the plot twist counts)

This was really good, I loved reading this story.