Pretty cool so far and eager to see more but I just have one question, is the main character speaking with an accent of some sort as
"Sure you didn't just hit yous's head?"
immediately strikes me as a typo, but at the same time I have heard people talk like that before and just want to know for sure if it's intentional or not?
9533970 Oh I gotcha, and I do like it as it does add to the character, that said though for future reference you should probably put that as like an authors note or something because I'd hate to see such a promising story get ignored because people think it's unedited or something
Huh? This looks interesting.
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Thanks!
Pretty cool so far and eager to see more but I just have one question, is the main character speaking with an accent of some sort as
immediately strikes me as a typo, but at the same time I have heard people talk like that before and just want to know for sure if it's intentional or not?
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It was intentional. The story takes place in the northeast, and even then, Midnight/Seth's speech is based off of my wrong way of speaking.
*sees this fic on the front page in new fics* OwO what dis
*reads the currently only chapter out*
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9533970
Oh I gotcha, and I do like it as it does add to the character, that said though for future reference you should probably put that as like an authors note or something because I'd hate to see such a promising story get ignored because people think it's unedited or something
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Okay, thanks for the suggestion!
I can smell the inverse cringe puns from here.
I love it.
What in the fresh hell even was this chapter?
Weird
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seems about right for most anything here xD
Amazing