After an attempt to restore some of the memories lost to the Memory Stone succeeds, Sunset finds herself caring for a horribly traumatized and emotionally unstable Wallflower Blush.
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Oh heck
You're doing a great job of conveying just how much there is, how all of this is just so much for Wallflower to deal with. I thought the conversation about what it really was, why she felt that way, and how the fact that she felt that way at the time made her blame herself even more was handled with great care. And, even though there's so much... Sunset's doing a really good job of navigating the situation and thinking of what she needs to. (I wonder if that'll last?)
OOOOOHHHH SHIT! WALLFLOWER'S PREGNANT?!
"Beautiful! This is simply marvelous my dear author! The pain, loathing, hell, you even nailed both the objectification of the body as evidence as well as tackle the ever-popular, preferred human act of trivialising occurances to make them more bearable. Reality always begs to differ.
I adore how life-like you make her pain appear. It seems both genuine and possible and Sunny doesn't sound too unnatural either. So plus-plus.
This is so, pretty.
It's almost art.
I like it! The portrayal is done so well, so very well. I commend you. And truely. This will be one hell of a fun ride."
Wallflower might be pregnant... whoever that guy is that forced himself on her better be rotting in a ditch of guilt right now.
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Let's be honest here, he probably doesn't even realise he raped her.
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Heh... you're probably right. xD
Poor wallflower, let’s hope she isn’t pregnant and it’s just a scare.. but at the same time, i get the feeling the writer wouldn’t mention it if it weren’t going to be relevant at some point, here’s hoping my hunch is wrong
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You, sir, are a master at expressing pain and i hope i can be as good as you one day. Well done.
If I may be frank, I'm glad this is the most recent chapter. If it wasn't, then I'd have to take it in bits and pieces, just like I did with Last Light. This is a really, really rough read.
Please don't take the following sentence the wrong way, but after all I've read I feel like I need to be in my comfort zone at the moment. A mental breather, if you will. That being said:
How in the blazing fuck don't you have more followers than me?!
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You're welcome.
Aaaaaaaaah!
Sunset Snorer.
And we're back into Wally's brain.
Sucks that Wallflower can't even bear to let Sunset or anyone else trace the dude down.
Somehow I doubt Sunset will be perfectly able and willing to keep her promise of full confidentiality.
```“I never s-said no...”
“You never said yes.”```
~Good exchange.
'Eyyyyyyyyyyy they finally say the 'R' word.
I appreciate that Wallflower is realistically bitter at this point. Too many fics centered on rape are simply vehicles for vicariously-cathartic cuddlefests, methinks.
"Inconsiderate" is a nifty way to refer to the body and its autonomous functions.
Whoops. Reality just dropped.
I wonder who's more scared of a bun in the oven? Wally or Sunny Bun?
The only thing more depressing about this fic is how it's compounded by the reality existing beyond it.
By the void…
Wallflower...
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I agree wiþ your message – ðe story is BEAUTIFULLY written. You cæn feel Wallflower’s pain ænd it is heart-wrenching.
I þink ðe only reason you got so mæny downvotes is because you worded it so positively, which I will admit made it seem cællous ænd jarring.
The gulf between those words has caused so many people unnecessary, unbearable pain. What I wouldn't give for people to learn about consent the same way they learn about HIV or drugs or many other PSA-worthy things.
Geez. Way to kick Wally when she's down. But it's realistic. Frighteningly realistic. This whole thing is. And you make it come across so raw, so bitter, so unabashed. I got writing to do, so I'm gonna stop for now, but I can't wait to see what the next twist and turn is here...
It was heartbreaking, seeing Wallflower take all of what happened and use them as tools to redirect blame to herself and minimize the awfulness of what happened. And then the twist of the knife, shattering even the floor of self-hate, dread, and trauma that Wallflower had reached.
I wish I had more words.
I am so glad Sunset made her make that promise, and that she followed through. One step at a time. Each moment unchained from the next. Better to not be able to connect them for now.