What happens when
well then something yhay to look at other than the yhay with the power lottery shtick (i personally prefer the one with the 40k vibe)
yhay? what is that?
9500548y yourh humana and y youyhay
oh ok
this looks interesting, please write more.
Each paragraph is one big run on sentence. Might want to invest in some periods.
Other than that, it was okay for the first chapter. I'll keep an eye on this.
I wanna see where this goes.
and pulled out a Luger from a glass case, and loaded it
Hanz got the lugar
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9500546Interrogative: Who the f#ck disliked all these comments?!
Ah the luger, a fine choice.
9587954lol
well then something yhay to look at other than the yhay with the power lottery shtick (i personally prefer the one with the 40k vibe)
yhay? what is that?
9500548
y your
h human
a and
y you
yhay
oh ok
this looks interesting, please write more.
Each paragraph is one big run on sentence. Might want to invest in some periods.
Other than that, it was okay for the first chapter. I'll keep an eye on this.
I wanna see where this goes.
and pulled out a Luger from a glass case, and loaded it
Hanz got the lugar
9500920
9500778
9500572
9500560
9500548
9500546
Interrogative: Who the f#ck disliked all these comments?!
Ah the luger, a fine choice.
9587954
lol