Finn's POV
Man, Klubbo wasn't kidding about the nasty wildlife in this part of the forest; first we run into a pack of Timberwolves, trapped them in a doggy pen of ice, then we cross paths with a chimera that wants to eat us, froze the freak of inhuman nature solid, should thaw out at some point...you know, probably, and lastly we meet a manticore, but this one didn't want to fight, so we just walked past it as it was guarding its nest from us, growling all the while. Maybe it was the one Fluttershy tamed in the Season 1 Premiere? Eh, whatever. Right now, we could a bit of light shining from the tree line and I think we were almost out of the woods, literally.
"I think that's the exit, Cozma." I say, pointing to the light.
"Are you sure?" she asked me.
"Pretty sure. C'mon, let's get outta here before something really bad happens."
Cozma held my hand like a daughter would do with a father and we walked towards the light...
"Hold it."
...I think I just jinxed us.
Someone stepped out in front of the path and...it was a human?! He appeared to be a white male in his mid 20s, with a buzz cut, and some mild facial hair, wearing what seemed to be clothing that is greatly resistant to high temperatures. Is he one of those blacksmiths from the "Man At Arms" YouTube series?
"First time I've seen another human since I got here, and with a pony kid to boot."
I stayed on my guard and kept Cozma behind me, she still can't use her Dark-Dark powers yet, so I gotta keep her safe. I know what you're thinking, "Dude, it's a fellow human! Why are you so tense?" Simple answer: he was brought here the same way I was, and that means he has a Devil Fruit on his side, I have to tread lightly here.
"Yeah..." I began cautiously, "And who are you, exactly?"
"My friends call me Khaine," he answered, "I'm a blacksmith, well, I was back on Earth before I came here. And you?"
"Finn. Finn Jackson. Just a guy trying to get by. And the filly behind me is my friend, Cozma." I didn't tell him of Cozma's amnesia, if this guy is evil, I can't take any chances.
"Okay, and judging by the fact that you're a human in this pony-filled land, I'd say you got a Devil Fruit like me."
Damn! He's got me figured out! "So what if I do?"
"As long as you're not bad, I won't forced to use my new powers on you, just laying those cards on the table now."
"And your Devil Fruit power is...?"
He waved his right hand outward, "Look to your left, and you tell me."
I did so, and gasped. Timberwolves, a massive pack, all frozen in solid gold statues, with terror stuck on their faces.
"...The Gol-Gol Fruit." I utter fearfully.
"'Gol-Gol'?" Cozma asked.
"A Paramecia-type Devil Fruit that allows the user to manipulate gold."
Khaine clapped a few times, "Bravo, very good. You're well informed. I was just digging for some ores when a Timberwolf pack attacked me, found a giant gold ore vein, and the rest is history."
"Wait." I began, confused, "Why were you looking for ores? Surely food and water are more important for survival out here."
"Easy, I knew what Devil Fruit I had, ate it, found some gold ore to make some of this world's currency, bought a smithy in town, and now I'm making easy money."
"A smithy? So you ARE a blacksmith."
He raised his hand with a smile, "Guilty. But how'd you know?"
"The outfit alone is a dead giveaway. I used to watch the 'Man At Arms' series on YouTube."
"Cool. So what Devil Fruit did you eat?"
Seeing as he hasn't tried to provoke or threaten us to a greater extent, I think we can trust him, "The Ice-Ice Fruit."
"Wow, a Logia-type? Impressive."
"And Cozma here ate the Dark-Dark Fruit."
"Yikes. But I thought humans were given Devil Fruits."
"I guess there are stray Devil Fruits in this world, because I was given this one by a toll bridge kiosk owner." I pulled out the Bomb-Bomb Fruit.
"Whoa! You better keep that on you unless you're going to give to someone you deem worthy."
"That's what I plan on doing." I put the fruit away, "So you said there's a town nearby?"
"Yup, Dodge Junction is just beyond the trees, that's where my smithy is, too."
"Good, we can restock on supplies. We got 99 bits on us, so..."
"Well...seeing the prices at Dodge, I doubt you'll get enough food and water to last you two a week."
"So what do we do then?"
Khaine walked over to the statues and morphed some of the gold off of them and turned them into bits, they even had the correct insignia and everything, "I took a little bit of gold off the statues to make you some more bits, 30 should give you enough. I can't take too much otherwise the Timberwolves will break free."
I look at the bits given to me, still unable to believe how perfectly accurate Khaine made the bits to be, "...You know, you scare me when you do that."
"A blacksmith must have a good eye, after all."
"Fair point."
"Now, let's head into town and get you two your supplies."
We began to leave the foreboding woods and straight to Dodge Junction...but if we stayed a little bit longer, we would've noticed the cracks forming on the statues and the growling of angry Timberwolves.
We entered the new town, and the first thing I did was take a good look around; luckily for us, I didn't see any wanted posters anywhere, guess Dodge Junction doesn't get news very fast. Khaine guided through town and helped with some of our shopping, suggesting some of the better, more filling foods we could grab, not to mention some more water. Since I didn't see any posters or the locals giving me the stink eye, I could finally relax for once as Khaine started leading us to his smithy.
"Welp, here it is, my smithy, 'The Golden Opportunity'!" he declared.
It was simple on the outside, plain wooden walls and doors, but on the inside when he guided us in was pretty complex; everything looked to be prepped with heat-resistant properties, blacksmith ponies working on the multitude of smelters, assembly lines to gather the metal pieces and put them together, and the air felt really hot, the perfect atmosphere for a smithy. I personally didn't mind it, I was born and raised in a state where it was really hot half the time and the weather was erratic on the other half.
"So, what do you guys think?"
"Very impressive, nice organization you got, and lots of ponies are helping." I compliment.
"It's little hot, though..." Cozma said, sweating like crazy.
"Of course it is, it's a smithy, it's always hot." Khaine added.
Seeing how Cozma was struggling to breathe the hot air, I spoke to Khaine, "I'll take her outside for some water, I don't think she likes very hot temperatures."
Khaine shrugs, "Eh, to each their own."
I took Cozma outside the smithy and immediately heard the shrieks of terror from the other ponies in town as a big pack of Timberwolves were hunting the townsfolk.
I knew exactly why they were here, "Uh, Khaine?! You're gonna want to see this!"
He ran out and saw the chaos in shock, "You don't think..."
"The pack you froze must've broke free and want revenge."
"Aw man..."
"Watch Cozma, I got this!" I pass her to Khaine and run into the fray.
"But why?" Khaine asked, but it was too late as I was already gone.
Khaine's POV
I don't understand, if Cozma has the Dark-Dark Fruit powers, shouldn't she be able to help?
"I can't use my powers yet." she utters.
"Huh? Why not?" I ask her.
"...I lost my memory a week ago, and I don't understand how my powers work. Mr. Finn has been helping me practice them, but I just can't do it."
I sighed, "Come with me. We're going to help him."
"Why?"
"The only way you'll find a way to use your powers is hands-on experience, you'd be surprised what you can learn in the heat of battle. At least, that's what I've heard."
"...Okay..."
"Let's go, it's a hot day today, and I doubt his ice will last very long in this heat."
We ran after Finn to aid him in this fight.
He's gonna need all the help he can get.
Finn's POV
Okay, this is NOT going well; today is a very hot day in Dodge and my ice pens are melting to the point that the Timberwolves are breaking free in minutes, I don't know what else to do and my powers are still limited! I was caught off guard by a random Timberwolf leaping at me and pinning me to the ground, but I was quick enough to freeze certain parts of my body before it could chew them off in its hunger. Unfortunately, the ice was beginning to melt and crack under the sun's heat and the pressure of the Timberwolf's jaws clamping down on my arm.
"It's times like these that I wish I learned the 'Iron Body' technique instead of toting a kid around..." I began to think for a moment, "...On second thought, I like having Cozma around, she's a good kid..." I heard and felt my frozen arms crunching, "BUT I COULD SURE USE A MIRACLE RIGHT NOW!!"
Suddenly, the Timberwolf was blasted right off of me and I felt a slight weakness in my body. But why? I've never felt weak like this...unless...I turned to see Cozma, her body radiating a dark aura around her.
She had finally awakened her power over the Dark-Dark Fruit.
"Coz...ma...?" I wheeze out.
She ran to me and hugged me as hard as she could, "Daddy!" she screeched out.
"Daddy...?"
"Guess she sees you as a father figure now," Khaine remarked as he looked down at us with a smirk, "Don't worry," he turned to see the pack fleeing in unadulterated terror, "Cozma's display of power scared them all off, I don't think we'll be seeing them again anytime soon."
I sigh deeply, "That's a relief..."
The sound of cheering broke out as the ponies of Dodge came out of hiding once the Timberwolves were run out of town and saw mine and Cozma's power and bravery towards them. This was the first time since I've been here that I heard cheers of gratitude instead of cries of fear. I began to pass out with a smile on my face, hoping that this moment wouldn't end too soon...
It's going to end soon.
After spending three days in Dodge's medical infirmary waiting for my wounds to heal, the moment I got out, we had gotten word that the Royal Guard were coming to inform everypony of who I am, especially setting up the wanted posters, also I just found out that the Princess doubled my bounty, now it's up to 20,000 bits. Lucky me...
We were in front of The Golden Opportunity ready to say our goodbyes for now, but let's be honest here, I'm never gonna be able to come back to this place, which is a complete shame, despite its outward appearance, Dodge Junction was actually pretty cool and so were the ponies that live in it. Khaine finally stepped outside so we could wish him well and thank him for helping Cozma figure out how to use her powers, but we were shocked when we saw him lugging a rucksack over his shoulder.
I had a feeling what this was about, "So, you're getting the hell outta Dodge before the Guards show up, too? Wise idea, don't want the Princesses to find out you have the power of the Gol-Gol Fruit."
But he just shook his head at my words, "You haven't figured it out yet?"
"Figured what out?"
"I'm coming with you guys."
"HUH?!?" me and Cozma shouted out.
"I can't just leave you guys out there, besides, I've been wondering what the rest of this world looks like." I tried to persuade him not to come with us, that he'll only have a target painted on his back, but raised a hand before I could speak, "No takebacks either, already left the smithy to my righthand stallion." he turned to an ash grey stallion with a black mane and flame orange eyes, "Coal Burner, I leave The Golden Opportunity to you. Make me proud."
He saluted, "I won't let you down, chief."
He face us again with a smile, "Well, let's get moving. I got a map on me, and I have a powerful feeling where we're headed next."
I stared at him for minute before smiling myself, "Yeah, alright. You're the designated navigator, then."
We follow our newest companion to our next destination, and something tells me this journey won't as lonely as I thought. Khaine, you may have power over gold, but you're a diamond in the rough, and I don't say that about everyone.
3rd Person POV
The Royal Guard had just finished plastering most of Dodge Junction with wanted posters of Finn and even missing filly posters of Cozma, hoping to get a reaction out of the townsfolk, but unfortunately, nopony seemed to pay attention to them or the posters. One would think that they're just busy, but Shining Armor, Captain of the Royal Guard, seemed to think otherwise.
They're hiding something...nopony would just ignore a massive bounty like this on the wanted posters... Shining sighed, But I can't force them to tell me what I want to know. "Pack it up, men, we're going home."
Groans rung out from the ranks as they returned to the Pegasi-drawn chariots and flew back to Canterlot with Shining stewing in his frustration.
I WILL find you, Ice-Ice Creature...I swear it.
Can I enter even if I don’t know absolutely anything about one piece and I’m just looking at the wiki?
10679121 Sure, the character sheet is on the third chapter
10679130
Yay.
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Little hollow.
Earth pony.
Tan fur. Red mane. (I think I said that right.)
Oblivious and slightly rude, but at least tries to be nice. Very prideful of red mane for some reason.... Can be a coward at times he knows he’s screwed. I’m terrible at describing personalities.
True neutral. Just trying to make money.
Ito ito no mi.(I think I said that right...)
Earth pony wanting more in life, after motivated by witnessing Traveling shows man went out and tried to get into the showbiz but was terrible at everything. After finding the ito ito fruit is currently trying puppetry out just to see if it works.
I’m rly bad at this. Despite how often I do it.
10679165 Is your OC male or female?
10679180
Male.
10679186 Okay, but I just looked up Ito Ito no Mi, AKA the String-String Fruit, I’m sorry, but it’s taken, try looking up a different one
10679191
Dangit.
10679208 Sorry
10679211
Turns out I can’t find anything. Any ideas related to either puppetry or acting? I looked up shapehfting demon fruit and all I got was the one from the one piece fanfic wiki.
10679211
Screw it is horo horo available? Is the one that produces ghost.
10679259 Sorry, was busy at home, let me check
10679259 Hollow-Hollow Fruit is free
10679334 Thanks, and nice choice of Devil Fruit, I was actually thinking up ideas for the Sand-Sand Fruit, but didn’t think they’d work, so Sand-Sand Fruit for your OC it is
Name: Cassiope
Race: Crystal Pegasus Mare
Physical Description: Mid to Late Teens with a transparent Fuchsia Grey Coat and a Snow White mane and tail. Cutie mark of a Snowflake.
Personality. Make one. Though my suggestion would be a slightly introverted Pegasus Guard who prefers to spend time flying through the snow outside of the Empire.
Moral Compass: Generally nice if not very vocal pony.
Devil Fruit: Snow-Snow Fruit.
Backstory: Crystal Guard who serves upon the Empires return who accidentally eats the Snow-Snow fruit upon which she is forced to go on the run due to the hostility of Cadence and Shining Armor.
10679431 Thanks, but someone has already taken the Snow-Snow Fruit
I don't know if anybody has already asked this, but are filler Devil Fruits available for use?
Omg it took me so long to realize what you where referencing. I have not listen to that song in so many years ty for reminding me of it.
10679933 Depends on which ones
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Looking forward to seeing how you execute it. Love the stories you've made. 👍
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Thanks and just to clarify when i am referring to Gaara's control i am meaning his ability to move sand to defend him on a subconscious level. As well things like his sand coffin using sand to fly,(yes I know Crocodile could do that to but Gaara has a more impressive version), and making weapons, armor and regular objects out of sand.
10680359 Thanks
10680374 I follow you, Gaara was one of my personal favorite characters of Naruto
An idea i would like to suggest is one of the Crusaders ends up eating a Devil Fruit. Like say Apple Bloom finds a devil fruit in an apple tree and thinks it might be a variant of zap apple and eats it to see how it tastes. This can be an interesting way to get the elements to start realizing that devil fruits and their users aren't necessarily evil.
However in the opposite direction I would suggest giving a antagonist of the Mane 6 a Devil Fruit and end up making the elements more convinced of the evil of their users. Examples would be Trixie(take your pick), Sombra with maybe the Kage-Kage No Mi, or even Diamond Tiara who while not an antagonist of the Mane 6, is currently in the timeline seen as only a mean and spoiled child.
Finally my last idea is having the Crusader who eats the Devil Fruit and Diamond Tiara (if you went with this idea) learning about the other secret and bonding over their shared secret, slowly learning more about one another before eventually becoming friends. Maybe even running away together if one or both of them are exposed.
10680512 That sounds like a good idea
Another idea is very simple but perfect idea is Pinkie Pie and the Pero-Pero No Mi.
...I mean, it is a fruit that allows for the creation and manipulation of various forms of candy.
Simply have Pinkie working in the kitchen one day, stumble upon the fruit (which in my mind is pink with swirls like her mane), and eats it thinking it was candy.
This also allows for the ponies to start learning the abilities of the fruits, maybe even leading to the discovery of seastone. It could also lead the elements to start seeing Celestia is going a little mad with the cruel experiments she could subject Pinkie to.
I needed to suggest this because while Finn can be stopped by taking Cozma hostage, but since the ponies currently think she is a hostage they most likely do this, he doesn't currently have a weakness with the exception of Celestia if she used her full power of the sun. So the discovery of seastone at least gives the regular ponies like the elements and Shining Armor a chance to be a threat.
10680650 Sounds like a plan to me
10680660
Cool.
If you don't go the mad Alicorn route you could also give some other elements some devil fruits.
Examples being Rarity or Twilight getting the Hana-Hana Fruit or Fluttershy getting the Suke-Suke No Mi.
10680770 Okay
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That will do. Thanks.
Are we allowed to update our oc or is it to late?
10681351 Update how?
10681418 It’s cool
Can I use devil fruits that aren't Canon or they have to be canon. Nevermind I found a good devil fruit.
10682541 As long as it’s not a fan made Devil Fruit, it’s legit
Name: Jason Rodriguez
Race: human
Physical Description:( just so you know I'm not very good at describing things) a 6 ft, brown skin, male of Mexican heritage, average build, black hair, sliver eyes, blue t shirt with a pug as the picture and Grey shorts.
Personality: fun to be around,trys to sees the best in people, enjoys to spent time with kids, will see his friends as part of the family, has a weakness to fluffy and cute animals and will hug them if given the chance and loves to watch naruto, one piece, legends of tomorrow, Arrow, and Flash. He doesn't fear death like most because he saw it as something that couldn't be avoided so he lives life to the fullest and fears gaining immortality because he doesn't want to see his family die as he stays the same age forever.
Morality: Will protect his family at any cost so if someone hurts his family he hurts them backin the same way they hurt his family and he trust his family with his life.
Devil fruit: ( Eaten ) the Mochi Mochi no mi fruit.
Backstory: He was trained in karate, and twakwando. Loved to go comic-con as Flash, Arrow, John Constantine, and or Atom and brony-con( yes he's a Brony but never watched it in front of anyone so he's a closet brony) and learned Latin, a bit of Greek and a bit of Egyptian to copy the spells John Constantine uses.
Lived alone for the most part, had a good job, visits his family and friends often. That is until he found a box with the Mochi Mochi no mi fruit and ate It after waking up in the White Tail Woods.
10682584 Thanks. And just to be clear, it’s the Mochi-Mochi Fruit, that allows your character to create, control, and turn into mochi (a type of sticky rice), correct?
Yep
10682637 Okay, thank you
Name: Nightshade Venom
Race: Thestral/Bat pony stallion
Physical Description: Coat Color:Ash Gray Mane: long, unkempt, Teal hair with Silver streaks parted down the middle of his head, Cutie Mark: A drop of poison
Personality:Very understanding, Confident, can be down right scary if he has to be, Creative
Moral Affiliation:Neutral good
Devil Fruit (Optional):Venom-Venom Fruit
Backstory:Nightshade has been studying poison since he was a colt. When he was old enough he went on a journey to find all he can about poisons.
10683030 Thanks, I’ll see what I can do
Ideas for ponies with devil fruits.
Sweetie with Scratchman Apoo's unnamed devil fruit ( Though I would call it the music-music fruit) because she was always implied to be talented with singing, so a devil fruit with musical ties fits well.
Scootaloo with the Float-Float Fruit (This is from a movie but is stated to be a real fruit), lets finally give this filly the power to fly.
Bab Seed with the Snip-Snip Fruit, simply because of that one comment about her being good at cutting things..
Diamond Tiara with the Kira-Kira fruit simply because she is named Diamond Tiara.
Finally the Flame-Flame fruit ending up with a Sunset who didn't run through the portal but instead simply has been on the run.
10684966 Thanks, but don't worry, I already have fruits planned for all of them, and truth be told, spoiler alert: I was indeed going to give Babs the Snip-Snip Fruit
Name; Doughy Nuts
Race; Unicorn mare
Description; Early to mid teen. Doughy has navel orange skin with emerald green mane and tail in a pixie cut that covers her left eye. Her right eye is a chocolate brown and her left eye is mint green. Doughy's cutie mark is a half eaten chocolate glazed donut.
Personality; Somewhat timid in big crowds but could give pinkie a run for her money when she gets excited or prank happy. Due to her past has trouble trusting others
Moral compass; True gray area. While not exactly a con-artist she won't go out of her way to help except for those that either gain her trust or inspire Doughy with their determination
Devil fruit; eaten the Awa Awa no mi (the soap soap fruit). If taken the Suke Suke no mi (the clear clear fruit) or the Gum Gum fruit
Backstory; Doughy is the sole Unicorn daughter of a Pegasus wonderbolt father and a Earth pony artist mother who lives in manehattan with her sisters who are both Pegasus that follow their parents passion of art and weather. Despite being born a triplet with loving sisters who care the world about her, Doughy always felt like an outcast around her parents who showed no love for her hobby or dream of being a chef and often ridiculed her when they believe she wasn't around. Unable to stand the mocking Doughy took a chance and entered a cook off competition with her best friend only to be backstabbed and later learn that her family paid her to sabotage Doughy so she would finally give up on her dream. After the betrayal Doughy ran away from her home where she found and ate the Awa Awa no mi in filly dephia
10685213 Thanks, and yes, the Bubble-Bubble Fruit is free for your OC to use
Oooo. The Golden Boy has arrived