9916131 Pretty clear Evil wants to ruin Fluttershy's life. As for whether she thinks Shy is a slut... she's most likely in denial over her failure to humiliate her in front of everyone, so while she knows Fluttershy is (or rather was) innocent as driven snow, she refuses to believe it.
I have no words. This manages to be equally adorable and hilarious. Seriously dude, eliciting an ear-to-ear grin from a story like this is no small feat. Whatever else the story holds in the future, all I can say is trust your instincts, because your writing style is exceptional. That said, I hope that Flutteryshy & her master have a bit of fun with their new reputations. Oh, also the occasional paragraph of Rarity-interlude.
“Look… Fluttershy...” Rising said, “you seem like a nice girl so I’m going to be completely honest with you right here and now. I know you’ve probably heard a lot about me, but the truth is…... I have actually NEVER slept with another girl in my entire life!”
Hey in the next chapter while Fluttershys enjoying her pet play life with Rarity and Sonata, do Sunset and Twilight sneak in the pet house at night to see if their friends are alright and to see what the Dazzlings are up to (even though this really isn’t a plan cooked up by the Dazzlings). And in the process got found out by other residents of the pet house, wound getting captured unconscious and were brought to Evil and made them pets of the pet house (against their own will)? Just a question and a hunch
9934227 No rush man. You have a good thing going, so you do you. Who knows, maybe they will end up at a certain beach while on vacation. One of mystery, if you will :p
By the way what does Evil look like I bet she has the same hair style as DJ Pon-3 only it’s black with red stripes and her skin color is a skyish blue color I wouldn’t be surprised if Evil looked exactly like that, also in the next chapter do Sunset and Twilight get caught while trying to scope the place out for their friends and get tortured by Evil?
Hey there three questions 1. Did you get my first question about character Evil? 2. When will the next chapter come out ? And 3. Will Sunset and Twilight get caught and taken prisoner by Evil ?
After reading this chapter, I am excited for what's coming next... I really wonder if Fluttershy and Rising Star will start getting to know each other outside of the mansion? They seem perfect for each other... Almost like...fated lovers!
Also, whoever this "Evil" character is, she doesn't seem very smart...
So wait, what was Evil’s real goal? To humiliate or help? Does she really think Fluttershy is a slut?
nice work
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Pretty clear Evil wants to ruin Fluttershy's life. As for whether she thinks Shy is a slut... she's most likely in denial over her failure to humiliate her in front of everyone, so while she knows Fluttershy is (or rather was) innocent as driven snow, she refuses to believe it.
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That makes sense. I’m pretty sure Fluttershy and Rising Star are jumping to conclusions if they think she was actually trying to help.
I have no words. This manages to be equally adorable and hilarious. Seriously dude, eliciting an ear-to-ear grin from a story like this is no small feat. Whatever else the story holds in the future, all I can say is trust your instincts, because your writing style is exceptional. That said, I hope that Flutteryshy & her master have a bit of fun with their new reputations. Oh, also the occasional paragraph of Rarity-interlude.
Oh my God, he's King from One Punch Man.
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Ha! Good One
Evil is evil hehe!
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The hammering of the Rising Star Engine signifies the pumping of blood... though not only to his heart.
So quick question, when will the next chapter come out?
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Probably not for another month or so.
Oh okay will you let us know when your next chapter will be posted, cause I’m like Rainbow Dash I’m very eager to see what happens next in the story.
Hey in the next chapter while Fluttershys enjoying her pet play life with Rarity and Sonata, do Sunset and Twilight sneak in the pet house at night to see if their friends are alright and to see what the Dazzlings are up to (even though this really isn’t a plan cooked up by the Dazzlings).
And in the process got found out by other residents of the pet house, wound getting captured unconscious and were brought to Evil and made them pets of the pet house (against their own will)?
Just a question and a hunch
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No rush man. You have a good thing going, so you do you. Who knows, maybe they will end up at a certain beach while on vacation. One of mystery, if you will :p
By the way what does Evil look like I bet she has the same hair style as DJ Pon-3 only it’s black with red stripes and her skin color is a skyish blue color I wouldn’t be surprised if Evil looked exactly like that, also in the next chapter do Sunset and Twilight get caught while trying to scope the place out for their friends and get tortured by Evil?
Hey there three questions
1. Did you get my first question about character Evil?
2. When will the next chapter come out ?
And 3. Will Sunset and Twilight get caught and taken prisoner by Evil ?
After reading this chapter, I am excited for what's coming next...
I really wonder if Fluttershy and Rising Star will start getting to know each other outside of the mansion? They seem perfect for each other...
Almost like...fated lovers!
Also, whoever this "Evil" character is, she doesn't seem very smart...
Ha! You got that right Shirousagi, she clearly didn’t think this would happen, great character that Evil by the way Very Sleepy.
Yo Very Sleepy when will the next chapter of this story be out?
*pleased sigh* Only an MLP BDSM fic with Fluttershy in the main role can be impossibly adorable, hilarious and hot at the same time.
Nice job👍
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Almost done, just need to do a final edit of it
Okay, great, can’t wait to read it .
Please let us know when it’s ready k.
So Very Sleepy when will you’re next chapter be posted?
Hey Very Sleepy i can't wait I'm so exited to see what happens to Fluttershy and her friends next.
Will the next chapter come anytime soon or later?