An 18th century Prussian valet gets sent to Equestria.
9485045Thanks for the advice. My weakness is wording, but I’ll try my best to improve and apply any constructive criticism that readers may give. I will try to fix that, and maybe re-post it later. Again, thank you.
YES! finally, a fic that i can relate to my story!
he will make Prussia proud. Now, what will he do to make Equestria a foe to be feared by any that dares to challenge...
when you hit that 150% discipline.
9485045I did my best to fix it. It may be better, or even worse, but I can't say that I didn't try. Both chapters are now edited.
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Thanks for the advice. My weakness is wording, but I’ll try my best to improve and apply any constructive criticism that readers may give. I will try to fix that, and maybe re-post it later. Again, thank you.
YES! finally, a fic that i can relate to my story!
when you hit that 150% discipline.
9485045
I did my best to fix it. It may be better, or even worse, but I can't say that I didn't try. Both chapters are now edited.
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