Sparkle's Masseuse

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RarityEQM

RarityEQM #1 · Apr 22nd, 2019 · · ·

Err...why is half of it in bold?

Roubean_Sammich

Roubean_Sammich #2 · Apr 22nd, 2019 · · ·

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Yeah... I missed the "/" in [ /b ]
Thanks for reminding me 👍

livinthelife

livinthelife #3 · Apr 23rd, 2019 · 2 · ·

The malapropisms were occasionally pretty funny, but still, this needs a bit of a run through. The story wasn’t terrible when I was able to figure out what you were trying to say.

DavisSentoV5

DavisSentoV5 #4 · Apr 23rd, 2019 · · ·

This was pretty good. I kinda wanna see a sequel/series to this. Love the idea of Sci-Twi being a futa

OmniFox

OmniFox #5 · Apr 23rd, 2019 · · ·

What if Sci-Set have their non-stop loving at Sunset's house?

dirty little secret

dirty little secret #6 · Nov 20th, 2022 · · ·

Grammar wasn’t exactly the cleanest, and the occasional 4th wall breaking moments do not help matters. It was also a bit confusing a few times about exactly what was going on. And it probably escalated a bit too quickly.

All that said, though, it had just the right amount of raunchiness. Pretty decent sex scene, even if the bed came out of nowhere. And the climax was pretty well paced.

Ending it with Rainbow’s intrusion works alright, even if she also came out of nowhere. Twi & Sunny: “I’m gonna punch that mare in the box!”

Shallow glass