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CapNTilfy


A lovable goofball who delights in spreading positive vibes and writing stories. =3 (AKA Orangie1984 of Derpibooru!)

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Amazing story

Cheer #2 · Feb 11th, 2019 · · 1 ·

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Dude. Let people write whatever they want.

Only there was a nudist group.

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NEVER!!1!1111!!!!!!1

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You are joking, right?

~Skeeter The Lurker

Any way, on the whole? Not bad. Seemed really fast paced but, not that big a deal.

~Skeeter The Lurker

9451792
How was this fast-paced? I'd be happy to receive some constructive criticism.

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Hey now, let's try to keep things civil here. Cadence, I understand your point, but I wanted to write this. I'm a huge sucker for romance, and I just so happened to choose OctaScratch just this once. I assure you that I have other stories (both released and upcoming) that are original.

I do have to ask though, why did you bother to comment if you knew you'd get chewed out over it?

Comment posted by Cheer deleted Feb 11th, 2019

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I don't think it is "fair enough", I think it's asinine. Apart from anything else, one of the reasons I really like this is because it's Octavia who takes the dominant bedroom role for once, which immediately marks it out from 90% of the Tavi/Scratch stories on the site (many of which are wonderful, of course), which portray Vinyl as the worldly, earthy sex goddess and Octavia as the blushing upper-class innocent.

Great story, and thanks for writing it!

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You're welcome. =)

Great story.

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