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Amazing story
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Dude. Let people write whatever they want.
Only there was a nudist group.
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NEVER!!1!1111!!!!!!1
9451562
You are joking, right?
~Skeeter The Lurker
Any way, on the whole? Not bad. Seemed really fast paced but, not that big a deal.
~Skeeter The Lurker
9451792
How was this fast-paced? I'd be happy to receive some constructive criticism.
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9451992
Hey now, let's try to keep things civil here. Cadence, I understand your point, but I wanted to write this. I'm a huge sucker for romance, and I just so happened to choose OctaScratch just this once. I assure you that I have other stories (both released and upcoming) that are original.
I do have to ask though, why did you bother to comment if you knew you'd get chewed out over it?
9452013
Fair enough.
9452059
I don't think it is "fair enough", I think it's asinine. Apart from anything else, one of the reasons I really like this is because it's Octavia who takes the dominant bedroom role for once, which immediately marks it out from 90% of the Tavi/Scratch stories on the site (many of which are wonderful, of course), which portray Vinyl as the worldly, earthy sex goddess and Octavia as the blushing upper-class innocent.
Great story, and thanks for writing it!
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You're welcome. =)
Great story.
9469030
Thanks.