nice work.

Pretty good. I wonder if Rarity <could> step on Twilight's face or cock next time ^^"

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Hey, thanks.
That sounds fun, but I'll go ahead a say it won't happen in this story
Offscreen, she might do it jokingly. Though this Rarity isn't really the Physical domination type.

Yeeessss I love the emotion in this chapter VERY well done! Rarity 100% loves Twilight back, she just needs to admit it to herself.

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Thank you, I'm glad you liked that
It was the #1 thing that I was worried wouldn't come through properly

Though just so you know
Any official confessions happen offscreen
The Fire Is So Delightful is chronologically the next story in the continuity
So go give it a read

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The D & S can stand for “Domination & Submission”. It’s not all whips and leather.
But yeah, I thought I sensed that.

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Right, that's fair
I just think they're worth separating for context

Though that's also just using broad terms
I could go deeper into their character motivations and what differences there are for them
But for Rarity at least, her domination doesn't come from a BDSM related mindset or intention

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Yeah. I've always found Rares to be naturally dominant.