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interesting ...... where is this going i wonder?
p.s hope it doesnt get too grim-dark
Self insert...
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self insert D:
Self-inserts aren't a good idea.
i hope this doesnt get to grim darky also.....
well... on the topic of grim/dark, i figured dark would work, considering the... circumstances of "my" appearence in equestria. i mean, a possable deal with the devil is pretty dark, am i wrong?
c,mon. A little grimdark here and there ain't so bad
I love the humor. If you read the brony's thoughts and dialogue fast enough it's downright hilarious.
"Rarity"
"Fuck my life"
This is almost worthy of a me gusta but hear have a scootalo
the middle of this chapter was confusing to me but the beginning and end wasn't so confusing to me
I have a feeling his plan will involve marshmallows....
ALL YOU BASE ARE BELONG TO US, KEYBOARD CAT. SCRIBBLES!!! what the fuck did I say?
Conscience: You said complete nonsense! You know with the bases, and cats and keyboard GLUHYVAN!
Hi.
Just a little formating tip, break up large amounts of text into several paragraphs. It's easier to read than a block of text two pages long.
Also, you should proof-read or have someone proof-read it, about one out of three dialogue line aren't capitalized.
That said, this is rather interesting.
Also, I'm too hungover to type correctly, I have to re-type every third word, due to having written another word in it's place. WHEEEE
*Salutes*
Dear Gawd, that Wall-O-Text at the beginning was scary, *Cough* I mean what!? Heavy does not fear anything!
Not evi at all..... MUHAHAHAHA!!! here have a thumbs up!