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Verry good Chapter, but to be honest, I expected the clop part to be a bit longer.
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Eh, I thought about it a lot. I didn't want Mid and Sky to completely steal the show from everyone else though.
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I can understand that and I am glad you did write it, the way you did.
The more time you give me to think about this Chapter, the more an interresting question beginns to from in my mind.
How would the Genderswap spell Mid used in The experiment on Sky affect Jason and Tempest?
Would Jason turn into a mare and Tempest into a women for the duration of the spell?
Would Jason turn into a woman and Tempest into a stallion?
Or would nothing happen at all?
Sorry, but I did read to much clop today.
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hehe, no such thing ;)
As for that... I'm not sure. I would argue that nothing would happen since Jason's biology wouldn't be compatible with the version of the spell that Midnight knows, but there's always the possibility that she could learn a version that works on humans as well.
Shining, you had a chance to show off the Crystal train, and you blew it!
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So many writers forget that good lovin' is supposed to be messy. Nice to see clean up mentioned.
What no messy feeding flurry heart? No dodging miscellaneous flying food mush? Maybe sunburst was taking care of flurry heart?