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Jaylin


Comments ( 12 )

I'm a little nervous... Stories with less then 2,000 word from authors with only story tend to die. How do I know this won't happen here, this story sounds really good!

Really good start, keep it up

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Haha Thank you! If there is any mistake in the story, please quote it and I'll change it as fast as I can. :)

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I'll try my best not to. I write in my free time which is also very limited. I enjoy writing :)

Celestia smiled."I'm glad you're so concerned for the safety of Ponyville. It shows me that I wasn't wrong in putting Ponyville in your charge. About Eric, all he has ever shown us was that he just wants to protect others, with a personality to match his strength. He wanted to secretly take 1 thousand bits instead of 10, saved you and the girls and isn't rude. However, we do do have to keep an eye on him for a short while and see the results. If he shows that he is as responsible as he is as powerful, we'll let him be a full fledged Equestrain."

Dodo?

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Sorry,I don't get it

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There is a do that is repeated I guess, i don't know if there was a pun in it

I'm enjoying this more and more chapter by chapter, good job!

Aww, the scene where Celestia and Twilight hugged was so cute! :twilightsmile::heart:

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