Spike starts a new dragon hoard with Starlight, Lightning Dust and Moon Dancer's shopping trip for fetish gear leads to a happy ending, Celestia enjoys a public play scene, and many other stories from Equestria's biggest consensual kink club!
Fairly sure you mean "pinpoint accuracy." A potshot is a poorly aimed strike at an unaware target.
“That is a lot of purple prose,” Spike commented, eyeing Starlight’s word-weaving.
None of that is purple prose. The Twilight joke is hilarious, but Starlight's intro paragraphs are just exposition. Maybe superfluous, but not purple. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Purple_prose (TVTropes' entry is an example in itself.)
Except for those, this is excellent! Not sure I can remember Starlight or Spike in anything else (save cameos) and it's a delight to see them here. Eager to read the rest!
This was great honestly, I would love to see you do more stories with Spike for sure. He is the character that I think many people find the most relatable and it is nice to see him get some love in his life. I think we got one aspect of Dragon mating here but I can't help but feel there is still so much for Spike and his hoard to learn. Not to mention I think seeing Spike with other dragons would be great, I mean I so see him with Smolder or Ember big time. Or even it turning out Sweetie having a crush on him and she goes to Starlight to ask to join them. There is a number of places this character could go and I would love to see more Spike and his hoard.
Fairly sure you mean "pinpoint accuracy." A potshot is a poorly aimed strike at an unaware target.
None of that is purple prose. The Twilight joke is hilarious, but Starlight's intro paragraphs are just exposition. Maybe superfluous, but not purple. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Purple_prose (TVTropes' entry is an example in itself.)
Except for those, this is excellent! Not sure I can remember Starlight or Spike in anything else (save cameos) and it's a delight to see them here. Eager to read the rest!
This was great honestly, I would love to see you do more stories with Spike for sure. He is the character that I think many people find the most relatable and it is nice to see him get some love in his life. I think we got one aspect of Dragon mating here but I can't help but feel there is still so much for Spike and his hoard to learn. Not to mention I think seeing Spike with other dragons would be great, I mean I so see him with Smolder or Ember big time. Or even it turning out Sweetie having a crush on him and she goes to Starlight to ask to join them. There is a number of places this character could go and I would love to see more Spike and his hoard.
where is the pic from?
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The mind of Mani!
Very nice chapter, and nice dragon bi- YOU KNOW WHAT I MEAN!
They want some double dragons.