When over 6800 humans in 12 teams play paintball using restored and/or recreated weapons of war for the entertainment of the masses find their way into Equestria with their equipment. chaos shall ensue
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The Armored car you used for your cover art I think is a 1/6 scale model. It reminds me of the 1/6 scale figures I had and the assortment of vehicles I had with them.
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*Whispers* he's onto us günther...
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Yeah I had an M 8 Greyhound, Willy’s Jeep, and a Kubelwagen. Had an assortment of modern and vintage style weapons for the figures too.
Is that armored car in the title picture yours by any chance?
Not the worst beginning I have read, in fact for a war/re-enactment type story, it's not too shabby. I would have enjoyed a tad more in the development of our main characters and likely a bit more on the other teams involved... maybe something like a sports announcer type thing introducing them while the main cast were eating breakfast prior to the start of the sha-bang... my 2 cents on that. Also, six month long... are you serious? Like 6 straight months of sim-com? I would believe 6 months of weekends of sim-com or some 4 week straight tourney in the summer, but straight? gods, even NASCAR ain't that bad! tiny nitpick, and likely not even that important to the story honestly, but just my opinion. Otherwise onwards and upwards to new chapters!
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