Great description. Listing all the stuff that you don't and won't do in detail is sure to make this story end up in a lot of search results for people looking for those specific things that are not in this story. So um, A+ in trolling I guess.

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That's actually just for people to see. Just what wont show up. I suppose I could go without it, but I don't see how it's trolling.

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But is it really needed? Particularly foalcon and scat, two things that aren't going to appear in a story without warning and won't be requested very often. is it really that big of a deal for you to ignore comments that request those things? It's ironic, but saying it will increase the chance of the people that find it wanting to see those things.

I'm just really tired of doing searches on here and finding stories that have nothing to do with what I'm searching for. Descriptions are for describing what is IN the story and are what the search engine uses. If you want people that will upvote your story to find your story, describe what is in it, not what isn't in it.

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valid point, I just wanted that reassurance to people, and ask that it not be asked. But that is a valid point, I guess I was just putting too much thought into it, I'll remove it, thank you for the input.

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me too.... but hell, there's gonna be more.

9380086
>o< its a nurgling!
Blessed by the plague father.

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Eeeeyup but not just chaos, the plague father represents Eternal rot Decay and renewal.

Always found it strange that people just kind of passed over those monsters.

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Heh. You're the only person I can think of who would get upset over being surprised with a lack of ponies being fucked in their gut knife wounds with a dildo fashioned from their own tied-off and shit-filled intestines. Presumably with a bone shoved inside to give it shape.

... god damnit, HR. What have you done to me?

Would benefit from a good bit of cleaning up, but eh, I'm still down to read more

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Yeah, I do this kind of stuff pretty fast. I could always get better I'm just kind of messy just trying to get the next high.

Still, thank you.

Wow awesome start to a good series. I was both worried for and looking forward to a bad ending there. Tho in the context of the world, I'm certain the Pegasi would prefer to write off their dead and infected/contaminated. Rather than save them. If you remember in the Alien franchise, Ripley was always at odds with the corporation who wanted to preserve the Alien for bio weapons research. And the Enclave is no different in that regard.