Deliah May is a pudgy pink earth pony from a town in the middle of nowhere. All her life she dreamed of opening a flower shop in the city of Oatly Burg. Oatly Burg is the place where many entrepreneurs have cut their teeth in making their own business.
When she befriends the wife of a wealthy cereal producer things seem to be going her way. Then one day at work, Delilah runs into a charming gentlecolt with an attractive pair of wings. Haunted by a past relationship, will Delilah give in to her desires for companionship? Or will she be pushed away by his reserved nature?
(Includes Mild Suggestive Themes and Mild Language)
(Co-Written and Proofread by ZephyrStrife)
Chapters (9)
I’ll be honest, the art made me intrigued enough to want to read it, plus I do like a god romance. It’s a very comfortable read, perfect for a cold winter’s day. No glaring grammar problems, I’d have to look closer. I look forward to see Delilah’s character grow. Sweet Gold is fun too.
Look forward to reading more
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Aw, Thank you! All art, including my avatar, was drawn by me.
I am super happy someone enjoys this little story so far!
I was excited when I saw a new chapter out. I’m intrigued by Swift Service, he reminds me a little of Oddjob from the James Bond film Goldfinger; mostly the violent tendencies. Glad we get to know a little bit more about Delilah.
Cute story, cutely designed OC with a cute name with a cute bird perched on her hoof. It’s a good read. Will definitely keep an eye on this one.
I can understand her nervousness there.
Am reading. Might do a full review once completed.
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Oh that's exciting!
Keep in mind this might be a long haul reading wise. Zephyr and I have plotted out up to seventeen chapters before the ending of Delilah's arc.
Happy Reading!
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I'll be waiting patiently, don't worry!
Oh Sweet Gold is very kind and as the first half of her name implies; sweet. But she seems to have a bit of a dangerous side to her. She’s very keen and I don’t think anything gets past her. I’d hate to get caught in her crosshairs. Delilah had better watch out when interacting with Sweet Gold’s husband. Sweet Gold is VERY protective of her man.
Oh and I like the name you chose for your main character. I haven’t heard that name but three times in my life. First was the woman Sampson from the Bible fell in love with. Second was the song “Hey There Delilah” by the Plain White T’s. The third is actually a secondary character in a FoE story here on Fimfiction . Now I have a fourth and that is your main character. It seems, at least for me, the name Delilah is a pretty name that isn’t commonly utilized.
It was the cover art and your OC’s name that attracted me to this story and I hope all the best for you and your writing endeavors here on Fimfiction and anywhere else.
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Aw, Thank you! Delilah's name was originally Daliah May but, it didn't sound right to me for a long time. It was actually the song "Hey There Delilah" that made me change it.
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You’re welcome : )
Ah so the song has had a small part in her name. Very interesting. Such a good song too.
Oh no. That didn’t go so well. But hey, Vanilla seems like a very understanding individual though. Hopefully things will improve for Delilah from here.
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Think of it more Vanilla's desperation for help around the shop because her sister is "lazy"
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Ah yeah. Really a bummer that her sister flaked out on her like that. But that did give Delilah the opportunity she needed.
We finally have it. The name of the pegasus in the image.
Looking forward to more.
Oregano....I’ve heard that name from somewhere, but I can’t quite put my finger on where from precisely.
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I considered being mean and holding back a bit more. But I decided that was too boring XD
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Really? Zephyr gave him the name a long time ago and I have no idea if her took it from somewhere
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Ah yes I looked it up. It is a type of plant used for culinary purposes. And I can’t help but think of the name of the state of Oregon when thinking of that word.
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Oregano is also in a lot of Italian dishes which get referenced later in the story with Oregano's family.
Keep an eye on this guy tho ;) things are going to get tense the more he is around!
It lives!
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So sorry for the silence. Life kind of took a priority last year.
Whoo! Cooking date!