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Great now i want to see twilight eat all the Food in a All you can eat restaurant and now i am a 100% hook
Ouch, right in the feels, Twi.
And then so comfy in the kitchen.
Keep up the good work, I can see the effort you've put in.
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Like I said, try to find an editor. Your english is pretty good, but native readers are going to stumble while reading the errors. It pulls you out of the story. Keep trying!!
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*smiles genuinely* Thank you ... as much as it ales me to know that I made so many mistakes, I will not stop writing in the foreseeable future. I will try to improve though and I hope I can show results soon, but for now, all I can do is hope that you are patient.
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Considering you're writing in a second language it's pretty impressive how well you're doing. Plus, fanfic writing is a great way to improve your skills. Keep it up!
This was really good, can't wait of the next chapter.
Poor Twilight. That dream was touching.
So Twilight is a tranny now? Should probably fix that, lol.
Rereading this because of the new chapter. One thing jumped out at me, Twilight would technically not be a noble. Nobles are aristocrats that have no direct right to the throne. Succession rights being what they were royalty and nobility were considered very distinct groups.
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I... I am sorry, but I can't follow you rn... *hehe* I've read my own chapters now... how do you come onto that idea? Or is it just a randome though?
Well... asside from the accuracy... did I miss something?
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This seemed like a missed opportunity for a little lecture. Twilight being Twilight, and not wanting to be associated with that group of pompous idiots, wouldn't just ignore that misconception.
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Well, cant do everything, but now thinking about it :D sure