What a marathon chapter! Glad to see the gang's all here, and finally putting Liam in his place. I'd be careful though, he's probably not to psyched about getting embarrassed in front of the group.
Good job so far, good mix of action, suspense, realistic reactions, and some humor. Just make sure you kill that cunt Liam and you’ll have a favorite from me.
Finally Liam got knocked the fuck off his high horse. Too bad he's still around to cause trouble; I just bet he's gonna do something retarded that will get people killed sooner or later, probably because of his xenophobia or because poor widdle pwide has been hurt.
Yeah, that's not the best choice ever. Vinyl being born deaf should have made it impossible for her to compose music; even Beethoven had... 2-3 decades? of working with music before he went deaf, so he had prior experience to fall back on.
On the other hand, it's not exactly a story-breaking issue, so I suppose there's no reason to get worked up about it.
I guess one could just chalk it up to magic. She is a unicorn after all. :P
9625011 Well damn, I was actually hoping for an update soon, this is one of the best stories I've read on this site... especially since you are gave some hints as to who might wind up with Dee.
9626843 Well, Marble and Limestone were the first 2 to come to mind, considering, from my understanding, the Choosing Stone, gave them hints on where to find their true mate, and with both the airship and Dee's airplane, winding up on Banoi, well, I think it's more then just a 'little' coincidence.
noch, noch, hello ?! hello!? ...... squinting ..... mmmm Marcus: it seems that no one is there. Kelly: I tell you I saw someone move in there. Logan: munch munch ... munch .... maybe panicked and ran; cruunch! or he became a zombie and is waiting for some poor devil to come in and be his dinner. Kelly: Shut up Logan, you see too much shit on TV. Logan: hey may be unlikely but not impossible Marcus: Anyway there seems to be no one at home, let's go back. Kelly: what are you eating? Logan: ##### you want? he offers the plastic bag Kelly: Sure!... as they go back where they came from ......
10044303 I promise I'm working on the next arc of the story, I have at least four chapters done and some more in the works, with the latest being edited by none other than Firesight himself ^^
10046013 My man. Glad to hear it. Sorry if you felt pressured but the story is great. Also glad to hear firesight is still kicking but he doesn't know me I believe. He has made some great stories as well
Damn, These People Are Messing Up The Timeline. There’s Liam At The Lifeguard Tower, And We Haven’t Seen Sinamoi At All He’s Probably Dead From Timeline Changes Or Something.
Oh no. He caught the horse fuck.
Phew...you got me with the last chapter, Derpy couldn't Take it if dinky dies to the Monsters or becomes one herself. And nice Star Trek reference!
About dee seeing the Bodies of lyra and Vinyl, i Guess even in such a Situation you can have some Humor
Damn, nice work. I think it's safe to say the video game survivors have either failed to appear or took an alternate route by this point.
Screw you Ken, you're supposed to be HELPING people, its part of your job!
Hopefully, Lyras injuries aren't life-threatening, or else things will get sad here, and hopefully Dinky gets out of this in one piece, hopefully.
Fuck you Liam, just fuck you to hell, god-damned anarchist.
I hope Liam gets eaten alive
What a marathon chapter!
Glad to see the gang's all here, and finally putting Liam in his place. I'd be careful though, he's probably not to psyched about getting embarrassed in front of the group.
Good job so far, good mix of action, suspense, realistic reactions, and some humor. Just make sure you kill that cunt Liam and you’ll have a favorite from me.
Finally Liam got knocked the fuck off his high horse. Too bad he's still around to cause trouble; I just bet he's gonna do something retarded that will get people killed sooner or later, probably because of his xenophobia or because poor widdle pwide has been hurt.
Overall, story's good. Consider it tracked.
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Yeah, that's not the best choice ever. Vinyl being born deaf should have made it impossible for her to compose music; even Beethoven had... 2-3 decades? of working with music before he went deaf, so he had prior experience to fall back on.
On the other hand, it's not exactly a story-breaking issue, so I suppose there's no reason to get worked up about it.
I guess one could just chalk it up to magic. She is a unicorn after all. :P
What's the word over here? They taking a break from their vacation?
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I have the next chapter done, and am currently working on the next chapter, slowly but surely.
I'm writing this story in an Arc format, so when the next arc is written up, I'll post it.
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Cool
So, how long is this next 'arc' supposed to be? And how many chapters do you have so far?
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I've got one chapter done up and editing it myself, and currently writing the next chapter.
As for how long it's going to be, I honestly have no idea, could be anywhere from 8 chapters to 16
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And, from what I understand, you aren't gonna post that chapter until you got the rest of them done?
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Aye, because I'd like to have a nice collection of chapters done so I can steadily update every week
9625011
Well damn, I was actually hoping for an update soon, this is one of the best stories I've read on this site... especially since you are gave some hints as to who might wind up with Dee.
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Aww, thanks! And really now? Who do you think he's gonna end up with?
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Well, Marble and Limestone were the first 2 to come to mind, considering, from my understanding, the Choosing Stone, gave them hints on where to find their true mate, and with both the airship and Dee's airplane, winding up on Banoi, well, I think it's more then just a 'little' coincidence.
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Ahh, interesting thoughts there :3 we'll see if it's true or not later on
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Hell, maybe he gets with all of the ponies, considering he's the only one who is giving them a chance.
Dee needs get the Left hand of glova
Is this a dead island crossover? Feels like it.
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Eventually, gonna finish the next arc.
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it is, actually.
Violently rolls up the sleeves
Oh god, this'll be interesting
Coming back to read this to refresh my memory! Spotted one typo:
Missing word?
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I have no earthly idea, lmfao, but I fixed it up best I could
noch, noch, hello ?! hello!? ...... squinting ..... mmmm
Marcus: it seems that no one is there.
Kelly: I tell you I saw someone move in there.
Logan: munch munch ... munch .... maybe panicked and ran; cruunch! or he became a zombie and is waiting for some poor devil to come in and be his dinner.
Kelly: Shut up Logan, you see too much shit on TV.
Logan: hey may be unlikely but not impossible
Marcus: Anyway there seems to be no one at home, let's go back.
Kelly: what are you eating?
Logan: ##### you want? he offers the plastic bag
Kelly: Sure!... as they go back where they came from ......
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Wait, your next arc is done?
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Not quite, but I'm getting there.
I'm finishing up the current chapter and there'll be maybe... three more before the arc is officially done and then update
9910363
Awesome!
Been almost a year since I updated this, whew
Bruh I need more of this. This story is Fantastic. Please
10044303
I promise I'm working on the next arc of the story, I have at least four chapters done and some more in the works, with the latest being edited by none other than Firesight himself ^^
10046013
My man. Glad to hear it. Sorry if you felt pressured but the story is great. Also glad to hear firesight is still kicking but he doesn't know me I believe. He has made some great stories as well
10046028
It's all good man, no worries.
And yea, Firesight's still kickin', and being an absolute madlad
10046099
Nice.
And of course he is. he is the one True Madlad
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I have several chapters up and ready, just waiting on a proofreader and to finish the last few chapters for the next arc
10154919
If you want a proofread, I could help with a few chapters.
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I might take ya up on that, tbh
Don't give up on the story
10651294
I shan't, dear friend.
FINALLY!
Reunited and getting ready to kick some ass.
But what about Dinky
Damn, These People Are Messing Up The Timeline. There’s Liam At The Lifeguard Tower, And We Haven’t Seen Sinamoi At All He’s Probably Dead From Timeline Changes Or Something.
I was so relieved that Dinky was still alive, I was really worried with the way Rainbow collapsed.
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He was the guy with the funky face tattoo. Remember? Showed up in the red truck with the other survivors.
Got a snort outta me, priceless.