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I like this story so far, but I have a serious problem with this chapter. The "turning" someone into a fillyfooler, it's insulting. You can't "turn" someone (or somepony) gay, it doesn't work like that. Either you are, or you aren't. It's not a choice, and not something someone can "turn" someone into. Maybe reframe it as discovering that they were, instead of them being "turned"? Just changing a couple words around would fix that.
1062272 Gah! I can't believe I typed that! You're right of course. Fixing!!
1062272>>1062272 word structure was changed. again, thanks for pointing that out. guess I should have slept and come back to that in the morning. It was probably four in the morning when I typed that.
Come on! Next chapter! Been waitin forever! Great story so far
1069892 working on the next chapter now lol