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Love the way it's going. Blueblood and Neighsay are gonna be total assholes though.
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That's the whole point
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I know but they'll get what coming to them.
(been rewriting)
and also its a good start keep up the good work
IF THEY GOING TO DO SOMETHING TO RACHEL IM GOING TO RIP THEM APART WITH A CHANSAW AND MAKE THEIR DEATH VERY PAINFUL !!!
Why is the second half of this chapter in black text?
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I have NO idea. What do you mean by that?
Dragon + Pony = Kirin
Dragon + Griffin = Basilisk
Dragon + Human = Natsu (Dragon Slayer)
Nothing to do with the story, I kept thinking about the hybrids...
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Once it passes the point where Spike is reading Rachel's messages, the text turns black. I can tell because I'm reading it on night mode
I agree with some Chancellor Neighsay thing (now it's going to be shit asshole), mankind sucks, but should have a proposal for a better fitro to bring humans to Equestria. Since Rarity was a victim (and something I said she's going to be a lightning rod for this problem)
This is one of the many reasons I hate Blueblood.
Frist!!!!
what? I wanted to do it, and its a very good story ..
Holy shit!!
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Same here, it's completely grey after the blue text shift and is illegible in Night-Mode.
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I don't know how to fix that. but i'll do my best to do it so it's readable
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At the end of the last bit of text in Rachel's message, there's a [ / ] with text in it. I'd look for that at the end of the chapter.
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fixed it :3
Im getting some serious Assasin's Creed vs the Templars vibes right now.
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really? o.O
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Yeah a bit but I know Spike and crew are gonna pull out in the end.
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No kidding.
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funny thing, I have only played assassin's creed once, a year ago. But it's only for five minutes with a friend. I haven't played since lol I didn't realize it has that vibe till it was mentioned
I really hope that you have some sort of fitting and ironic punishment for Blueblood and Neighsay when the time comes.
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It kinda does with Blueballs and Neighsucker acting a lot like the Templars.
They will be killed very slow while I hear their screams of mercy I show no mercy to the genocide they will suffer FROM Me!!!
I've been hating on Blueblood, but more than ever to Neighsay! But Rachel with the soundcard from Pinkie Pie, awesome! But what i I'm afraid of is Rarity taking that potion. I have a feeling that it's not gonna go well. Great chapter, though.
Fuck once and for all.
I understood the reference
to feel fear
Twilight was not supposed to show and give her the potion, this is going to suck.
Rachel has some kinship from The Texas Chain Saw Massacre
You know, if she's in those days, just RUUUUNNN.
RUUUNN to the mountains
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Oh that doll is so going to make a come back XD
Haha! Well this was funny.
the campaign against humans has already begun.
Where's the demon doll, to play terror in the castle with six main and friends?!
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next episode XD
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Does anyone else get reminded of the movie "The Greatest Showmen" because of the title?
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Lol its kinda the theme song of the two when it comes later. I plan on doing an animatic with the song and the characters
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Oh. Pretty neat.
OK, let's start:
Seriously, what's in her head?
Discord is sure to have the right day is already difficult everyone plays table rpg O & O (Equivalent to D & D), respects the day for Spike plays.
I have three things to say there:
1- in any multiverse will always have assholes.
2 - The plan already shows a very fast radius of action nor do I want to imagine other humans already suffering this. I know humanity does shit.
3- The video that is in him someone who came from our world, and is revolting the ponies, this reminds of the avengers the era of Ultron just look at the internet to want to destroy humanity. There is another theory that may be the video more will turn Spoiler and I do not want to one of Sherlock Holmes.
Fair doll case was funny the Spike reaction. Does that solve or does it not?
Today I was recovering from an influenza, so without much joking.
I noticed that dragons and humans are exactly alike
when I finished reading
Does this story have anything to do with Uchuu Sentai Kyuranger?
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Don't even know what that is lol.
That potions gonna make Rarity have feelings for Racheal isn't it?
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I see welp i going to rewriting my comment right now thanks for pointing it out mate
first you are alive hey!!!
Second, the same that goes shit and one of the biggest, will take, that goes wrong (case of rarity).
still keep cute Rachel and Spike.
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Just a small spoiler, the next chapter is mostly rarity, that's when shit will hit the fan, just having a bit of fun with the pony for a bit.
just read the other story and i really liked it, i hope this one gets complete.
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It will
Oh dear...
Rarity, have you not learned from what happened from the last story?!?! Starlight is probably still pissed at you for what you did to Spike. And now you wanna steal the potion from Twilight's castle? I smell an friendship ending in the next chapter.