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Luna had once visited the dreams of a mare who shouldn’t exist, a thousand years ago. While on the moon, the number of strange dreamers grew to a grand total of 14.

She did not expect to find them in the current day alive and well. Truly the beings which they’d dreamt themselves to be instead of being regular ponies like she had lead herself to believe.

And to think that finding the mare that inspired her guards armor was just the beginning of, of, whatever these series of events should be called. Luna certainly doesn’t know.

I would like to make note here that the Horror, Dark, Death, and Violence tags are there as precautions for now, for the most part. Most if not all of the relevant things associated with these tags will not be mentioned in any great detail however, thus the overall rating. The amount of profanity will vary from character to character.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 6 )

let's see where this goes.

The ending got me! :rainbowlaugh:
I seeeeee potentiallllll !!!
Instantly tracking this. Keep that imagination running!

I'll admit, I haven't read your story, but you REALLY need to work on your long description for this because it doesn't draw me in, it just makes me wonder what the hell is going on and what this story is about.

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Thank you for pointing this out and giving feedback on it. It was always meant to be a temporary long description until I could figure out a better one, but I have now replaced it with something that should be better. For now, at the least. I’ll still be working on it as this story develops too.

Looking good. I'd prefer an update for the Danny Phantom fic, but it's not my fic. And not my choice.

P.S. Love your work, it's already looking better than your last chapter for the DP fic.

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Thank you for the feedback ^.^ sorry I got to this comment late.
(The second chapter’s ending seemed...lackluster? To me at least. Couldn’t find a good (enough in my mind) note to really end it on.)

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