Ok this is terrible fic now.
You RUSHED EVERYTHING!
This fic is garbage now! You threw everything in here gave him several hundred girlfriends in five secs flat.
the the bit on Blood blood was so fat the Road Runner still trying to catch up!

Or let me put this way in one simple name....GARY STU! ECHOS ECHOS ECHOS ECHOS Echos echos echos echos echos....

I like this so far.

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You do know in the description of the story it said a One-Shot story and that it uses anime logic right?

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oh yeah ok that makes everything better,........NOT
I'm sorry but even anime logic not this bad.

I have a bunch of other stuff want tos ay but...no no. I'm just going to leave.

I think the image of skys clothing not there what does she wear?

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Actually I got permission to use the temple from him.

"DAY IN AND DAY OUT, I RISE AND I FALL, I BRING LIGHT TO THE DAY AND SHINE THROUGH OUT THE UNIVERSE WHAT AM I?"

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Sun

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correct, next riddle.
"i come out only at night, but several planets have at least one or more of me, i circle around the planets to keep them in a balanced orbit, while my job is important only one of me circles the earth, what am i?"

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I asked if I could use the temple and he or she agreed to it if you do not believe me go to the story and look in the comments section

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Moon

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I did indeed give you permission. And good use of the temple you did do. Excellent story.

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Thank you. Master Yoda (if you read it sounds like Master Yoda)

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I know. I didn't realize till after I sent it.

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correct, now this is a free for all question and my final riddle, who ever get's it right will not only get to help out on coming up with new ideas but i will make special requests for future stories.
here is the last and final riddle.
"my story began in 1908 with the launch of my sister Olympic, launched in 1911 fitted out in march 1912, sea trials in April, then set out in that same month for my maiden voyage, sadly i never completed my voyage for i struck an ice berg and sank in 2 hours and 40 minutes, my story is told again and again, with new pieces of my story being uncovered, my story is famous, not for being the largest afloat, nor being the safest, so who am i?"

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Is it titanic?

That reminded me of a fic called a man's furry lovers somewhat

Is there going to be an update anytime

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It better because I gave them permission to use the design of the temple.

I wrote "A Man's Furry Lover's" after all