To Err is Equine

by RLYoshi

SEQUEL: To Forgive, Celestial

It's out now! Click here to see it!

WARNING: As the description states, this sequel will have an increase in its dark content, as well as have sexual references and even outright sex scenes (though noted so they can be skipped), so it's been rated as Mature.

Comments

[RLYoshi]

3110542 I kind of overdid them early on. Don't worry, I decrease their usage over time.

[Queuefka Palazzo]

Oh, hey, what's this? Looks intere- It's Chessverse.

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[RLYoshi]

3111023 ...is that supposed to be your way of saying you don't want to read this because it's Chessverse?

[Kage no Brony]

3111026 3111023

Yeah, I don't really get the chessverse either...

[RLYoshi]

3111051 I can understand that, but if it helps, my story doesn't get too involved with Chessverse events aside from occasional references and one crossover.

[Queuefka Palazzo]

3111026>>3111065

I started several of them. Then each of them started piling on crossovers and became unreadable. Chessverse is a big, red flag for me now.

You say it sticks to itself, though, so I'll give it a shot.

[RLYoshi]

3111322 Really, while it happens in the same universe as other Chessverse stories and has occasional crossovers, I like to think of my story as being mostly independent and unique. So thank you for giving it a try.

[Kage no Brony]

3111341

I think I'll give it a shot, too.

Just trying to figure out which needles have vaccines and which hold deadly neurotoxins...

[D-Bence35]

3112221 Yep. Fuckin' White Walkers I tell ya...

[RLYoshi]

3118245 I don't actually speak German, and I wasn't the one who wrote that line; Literature was.

[RLYoshi]

3119779 Tease it...

[RLYoshi]

3124257 The others would have already explained to him that Cinder was fine. So yeah, it was the latter. Or at the very least he didn't like the thought of going to a racist city again.

[RLYoshi]

3125880 Dead Bite by Hollywood Undead.

[Scarlet Streak]

3118837 I see
Not that I mind or anything; I actually thought it was funny. In a good way, of course

[Scarlet Streak]

3125909

[DstroyA]

Great story, just sad to see that the sequel is Mature
I generally make a point to keep my mature content filter on at all times, so while I did enjoy this one, I'm going to have to pass on the sequel. Thanks for writing anyways, just once again my desire to keep reading gets completely shut down by that pesky Mature tag...
I personally would love it if you could release a "clean" version that would allow you to drop the tag, though that is just my selfish desires voicing themselves, and would also most likely be inordinately time-consuming to pull off properly.

[RLYoshi]

3142148 I was thinking of actually doing something like that. I'll see about doing that.

[Serefin]

3148087 It's a what? Sonic nerd? Because that's really putting a limit on my nerdiness.

[RLYoshi]

3158103 Basically, yeah, though all articles are based off of existing video games, movies, TV shows, web-produced products, etc. Nothing random.