Aegis. An ancient word that means parental love. When five foals get locked inside a mall at night, they discover that not all entities grant them such love. If they survive the tortures, they might find out what the absence of Aegis truly means.
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Aegis. Also a high tech integrated sensor and weapons system used by the Navy.
Dreadnought
Sounds Good so far. Good Work with the Accent too. I always struggled with applejack's and Apple Bloom's Accent in my Stories, and so did i with babs.
9219072
Good to know, but I don't think we will operate on that level of technology here. The powers at work here are of a more mystical kind.
How do you get along with the accent?
9219871
Thanks.^^ How do the dialogues work for you? Do you get along with them well or do you have trouble understanding what is said, especially from Fast Bun and Curtain Call?
9219903
I can understand them, just Writing them is hard if you are not familiar with it.
9219909
Good. I will collect some more feedback on this and if many have problems, I'll offer an accent-reduced alternative.
9219915
Good idea.
Not sure what you mean by this.
9220112
The Manehattan accent the foals speak in my story. I was under the impression you read it.