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Pretty good so far. Can't wait to see who's next to get stimulated.
Good job so far, can't wait for more chapters, in particular hoping for rarity and sunny
Just one thing I noticed reading it again.
Proportions are slightly incorrect.
You said the puasy was almost as tall as Norman right?
I mean if Norman is slightly taller than a Pussy he should be doll sized, so it is hardly impossible that twilight didn't notice him falling on the skirt.
I bet you wanted to make him smaller but this detail you wrote implies he's at least 4 inches tall(10 cm), not so small to be unnoticed especially if twi is looking down
I am dissplease that this story is called Nano-Norman, even though this has nothing to do with nano size :/
9235376
>virgin clop
>accuracy
Friend, I think there's something you missed.
9235473
Well if you read twilight's chapter you'll notice that Norman is described bigger than the story wants him to be.
I mean he's supposed to be invisible to sight, yet he's as tall as twilight's pussy, and in this chapter Dash's nipple does the same thing.
I mean a clop story is a clop story, but still details like this are important
9237435
Dude, it's clop. It's not (generally) accurate, believable, arousing, or even consistent. If you can manage a laugh or two, it served it's purpose.
9237515
Ok but still, there are people like mean that care about little details, so I don't really care if you enjoyed it, good for you, I liked it too, but still details matter for some people, believe it or not
9237515
And your generally can go to trash cause 98% of clop FICS i read were at least accurate.
So what's the problem in pointing out the fact that these things can be bothering to someone?
And judging on votes Im not the only one (to be clear I upvoted it, but still I'm free to point out errors writers make)
9237517
You're taking this, for lack of a better term, seriously? When bestiality isn't the only...thing to raise an eyebrow in a fic, I'd think expectations and standards kinda go out the window.
9237526
I'm not taking it seriously, it's just I like details to be correct, even in clop fics and I'm free to point it out, as much as other people are, if I read he's invisible to sight but then I read he's taller than a pussy I can picture it right, that's just me
9237526
I have my opinion, you have yours, end of the story
So if that guy expected Norman to be nano, as the story says, what's the problem?
9237520
>accurate
Most clop usually goes
1. Canon characters acting OOC and fucking each other, usually through contrived series of events.
2. Canon characters gaining a fetish they didn't have before, then playing as above.
3. Canon characters falling for an author/reader self-insert (again OOC), and then fucking said stand-in.
Sure, you got outliers like that Shakespeare guy, but they're 1 out of 1,000. This is before you get into the inaccuracy of the sex scenes themselves, which is a different (and hilarious) can of worms.
9237539
I'm talking about about a different kind of accuracy you didn't get
If you put your character in a specific dimension, you are supposed to be able to keep I'm that way.
That's what I'm talking about.....
Like a story that stated the protagonist to be half an inch tall and depicted a nail as a field that extended itself
for miles.....or here when you obviously being taller than a pussy won't be neither invisible nor weight almost nothing
9237549
Fair enough. There is one thing you're forgetting though: Sturgeon's Law plays out a little differently when a work is based around romance or fucking. The ratio of good to bad is a little more skewed.
9237562
That's why I still upvoted the story as I said, still I'm free to tell I would have appreciated more accouracy on that part, as much as the other dude was.
Heck of a job, Mass.
analingus/rimming?
Now I wonder if Norman's gonna be brought to Rarity's home after this.
Wonder who's next
...Go on...
(Also, might want to edit it to fix his proportions. I mean, if he's so small he can HUG her clit, he's not "as tall as her pussy"...)
I laughed SO HARD at this
I don't think that's the word you wanted here...
I want to see who else is this Norman guy will try his luck on next.
*Ahem* Sunset Shimmer *fake coughing*
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I wouldn't mind him having a shot at Pinkie, but I guess someone will have to commission it. ;)
Still, if nothing else - funny as hell. :D To be perfectly honest, it'd probably be hilarious if he got a shot at Twi again, only this time she'd be somewhat suspicious... Then he'd go for Pinkie Pie, then Twilight again... at which point she'd find him... ;] ... and beg him to continue! :D