One note... its fairly obvious you've never had sex in water, it NEVER works as lubricant, ever. That's okay, people commonly think hey soapy water is slick, and shower sex is great (and it is...it really is) but that's MOVING water, standing water like in a tub acts as a solvent not a lubricant. Point of fact its one of the fastest ways to dry up the vaginal area for penetration leading to painful and downright uncomfortable sex. Now there are lubes that are non water soluble such as silicone based, but that's farther along technologically speaking than most put the Crystal Empire or most of Equestria for that matter. Then there are food based lubricant, the Greeks and Romans were well documented in using Olive oil for that purpose, but that can frankly cause medical issues and wouldn't really work well in a tub sex scene anyway. Best bet? Take them to the edge of the tub and out of it. Even sitting on the edge will give the same feel to the scene while making it more realistic. loving it so far!
9178432 Yes, magic could work, hell she could just enchant her own secretions to not dissolve in water for a short period of time. But let's be honest here...that's lazy writing and this does not strike me as lazy writing. Just one man's opinion.
"True, but I'm not really comfortable turning my daughter into my safe word."
I thought this was set before Flurryheart?
...I also call dibs that the safeword is Blueblood.
We talked about it ever since I accidentally injured him.
I thought he was just leaving the Empire for awhile. Is he unable to have certain types of sex? Or did she ride him too rough one time, and they decided to have him as a backup?
"Well then, looks like two cherries are getting popped."
Uh, just because Shining doesn't like double penetration, that doesn't mean he can't take her back-door. It just means he doesn't want to take both areas at the same time, or he doesn't want to use a spell to do it. But there's no reason for her to be a virgin in that respect. In fact, Shining could just pump out of one and into another, or use his hoof, or even a toy while he was using the other one.
Now that that's outta the way, I want to congratulate you on a very steamy chapter with a nice mix of action and emotional investment on behalf of the characters. That part is particularly important, since some stories just want to focus entirely on the clop scenes without growth of the characters, even when, like Spike, they're virgins and there should be some emotional aspects involved.
Ok. Well, I guess mine's easy; Jabberwock. After listening to Twilight try and translate that poem for over a month...
I didn't think Jabberwocky was that hard to understand, most of the nonsense words are names of made-up creatures and any nonsense words meant to be adjectives are still derived from actual words. Twilight's probably overthinking things... again.
just wanted to say thanks for the story so far, keep up the good work, tracking to make sure i dont miss any new chaps hahaha. funny thing is i dont read alot of clop(think thats the right word) most of it is only alittle through out the stories i read or at the end lol but i like spike stories & i like this 1 so thanks :)
One note... its fairly obvious you've never had sex in water, it NEVER works as lubricant, ever. That's okay, people commonly think hey soapy water is slick, and shower sex is great (and it is...it really is) but that's MOVING water, standing water like in a tub acts as a solvent not a lubricant. Point of fact its one of the fastest ways to dry up the vaginal area for penetration leading to painful and downright uncomfortable sex. Now there are lubes that are non water soluble such as silicone based, but that's farther along technologically speaking than most put the Crystal Empire or most of Equestria for that matter. Then there are food based lubricant, the Greeks and Romans were well documented in using Olive oil for that purpose, but that can frankly cause medical issues and wouldn't really work well in a tub sex scene anyway. Best bet? Take them to the edge of the tub and out of it. Even sitting on the edge will give the same feel to the scene while making it more realistic. loving it so far!
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There is a far simpler solution, friend: Magic. This version of Cadence magicked her bath so the water wouldn't interfere. Or something.
Your comment is still worthwhile—education and whatnot—but magic is almost always a serviceable solution to nearly any dilemma like this.
I really want her to get knocked up
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Yes, magic could work, hell she could just enchant her own secretions to not dissolve in water for a short period of time. But let's be honest here...that's lazy writing and this does not strike me as lazy writing. Just one man's opinion.
The name is Blueblood, ain' it?
Also---->
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This.
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Noted.
Guess it's a good thing this is the first time I've written a tub scene?
Claim her.
Right so, they've been experimenting for years and yet this is the first time she has anal? Doesnt quite make sense to me.
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well, there's bound to be a few things one of them is reluctant to try. Anal was probably one for Shining.
suggestion make spike have cadence dress as a maid and clean his body with her body
Well that's it. Season 9 of MLP, should have Spike move to the Crystal Empire!
So much love is waiting there for him! Even the everyone rated kind.
Great job!
9176965 Holy shit, you're here?
Your already thinking of another story where Pinkie sends Spike to the Pie Rock Farm to help Limestone and Marble out?
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think there's already one out there
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Princess of Love; overclocked libido.
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One that involves Spike, Limestone, and Marble exclusively?
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not sure.
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There you go.
I really like this story. Makes me wanna make a sequel to 3:00am at the Crystal Empire. No shade, but seriously good story man!
I like stories were it's not the partners cheating. Polyamory isn't evil<3
I thought this was set before Flurryheart?
...I also call dibs that the safeword is Blueblood.
I thought he was just leaving the Empire for awhile. Is he unable to have certain types of sex? Or did she ride him too rough one time, and they decided to have him as a backup?
Uh, just because Shining doesn't like double penetration, that doesn't mean he can't take her back-door. It just means he doesn't want to take both areas at the same time, or he doesn't want to use a spell to do it. But there's no reason for her to be a virgin in that respect. In fact, Shining could just pump out of one and into another, or use his hoof, or even a toy while he was using the other one.
Now that that's outta the way, I want to congratulate you on a very steamy chapter with a nice mix of action and emotional investment on behalf of the characters. That part is particularly important, since some stories just want to focus entirely on the clop scenes without growth of the characters, even when, like Spike, they're virgins and there should be some emotional aspects involved.
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had planned that, but changed my mind.
and they were discussing the idea of asking someone to help her keep her libido in check ever since she accidentally damaged his pelvis.
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Huh, didn't know that.
I didn't think Jabberwocky was that hard to understand, most of the nonsense words are names of made-up creatures and any nonsense words meant to be adjectives are still derived from actual words. Twilight's probably overthinking things... again.
just wanted to say thanks for the story so far, keep up the good work, tracking to make sure i dont miss any new chaps hahaha.
funny thing is i dont read alot of clop(think thats the right word) most of it is only alittle through out the stories i read or at the end lol but i like spike stories & i like this 1 so thanks :)
please update.
Keep going please >.<