Hole-y Frijoles

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TheMultiBrony21

TheMultiBrony21 #1 · Oct 4th, 2018 · · ·

Would've been better if it actually described her fucking Flash.

7/10 for creative writing.

Bluzerker

Bluzerker #2 · Oct 4th, 2018 · 1 · 2 ·

Love the title, picture and description. :3
Needs a bit more pacing, maybe extend it a bit by having dash try to do some advances on flash. Flash being a gentleman politely refuses, but that doesn’t stop the dash. Oh no sir. Maybe a chapter per scheme for dash to be in Flash’s pants. Maybe near the end have dash find someone else to have “love-making” with, or simply give up. Then her friends come over and tell her not to worry about her being gay or not, because they love her for who she is. And it’s silly to think about this kind of thing.
Then make a funny,
By having someone who likes dash come up to her about what she originally intended and she does a funny. (Lol,idk)

FanOfMostEverything

FanOfMostEverything #3 · Oct 4th, 2018 · 4 · ·

Points for the term "incestral." And I do like how Soarin' doesn't even seem to register in Dash's quest to assert her heterosexuality.

That said, every time basically anything happens to Flash in the BCU, I feel like I should apologize to him for getting him into this mess in the first place.

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