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Are Twilight and Pinkie will ever find out what's behind those gilded palladium doors?
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Yep, but not quite the way I originally set things up
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I still wondered why AU Spike was not surprised or angry at Prime Twilight and Pinkie for not telling him about not being his Twilight and Pinkie. It felt like, "yeah, cool" and that was it. Things like that you would expect a bit more of a reaction like where are my Twilight and Pinkie!? Have they been kidnapped? I have a personal set of Skills that make me a problem to ponies just like you! etc.
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I’ll see what I can do to remedy that
Nice chapter.
I'm honestly kinda disappointed Spike found out so soon.
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I had planned for him to find out later but something just kept nagging me to make it happen sooner
My only issue here is there's no direction for Spike's voice. He didn't come out forma dark corner or through a door, it's like he magically poofed into the room without anyone knowing.
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I was trying to imply that he arrived without being noticed until he spoke, sorry if it didn’t quite come off that way.
This was definitely not what I expected