A troubled engineer to a corrupt chapter of the Steel Rangers finds things out about his past, and while trying to fix prior mistakes and make things right for the wasteland, tries to discover the truth about his own, fleeting self.
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Oh, I'm fine with long chapters. (though I do think there should be a limit (Seriously, why would you want a 69K chapter in a story with chapters that don't even come up to half that length?)) It's having to take a break from what I'm currently doing to slog through a really long chapter that I don't like. (especially if it's a story that doesn't seem to be ending anytime soon) As it is the chapter length seems reasonable and I have read longer chapters, so you don't need to worry about me never reading the story, I'm just not going to drop everything and read it right now. Also, is this story based off of Fallout: Equestria - Rising Dawn?
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Para is a piece of work. He's definitely annoying.
I'm used to writing serious characters, so all things considered, I like to think I'm doing good with Para's character. He has a funny quality to him, yet, at the same time, infuriatingly annoying.
You either love him, or you want to smother him with a pillow in his sleep. There is no in between.
I really liked this chapter with all around it, had its serious moments but also some fun on the road ;) wonder if Blaze and Tezu can have some fun scene haha, seeing how Para gave some to Charger that's my OTP x3 Keep it up