• Member Since 20th Jan, 2018
  • offline last seen 1 hour ago

AntiBronyBenSwolo


I might as well be the only Anti-Brony here. Anyway, I also like Star Wars :P. P.S. Tari is best Duck Nerd

T

Darth Maul, a powerful Sith Apprentice-turned-Criminal Warlord, has traveled far and wide to the reaches of the galaxy, but never expected to see something like this in his life. Now he stands in not just another world, but in another universe entirely where humanoids are mostly replaced with equines, and his body has been malformed to become one of them.

And now, he's off to change the timeline in his own dark, twisted image.

Chapters (16)
Comments ( 69 )

Interesting, I shall have to see where this story goes.

I had my own idea for Maul in Equestria, but that one involved him around the time of Rebels instead of Clone Wars.

9024694
yeah, tbh, I was trying to fit in my head where this story takes place in Maul's life.

9112326
How's PBB going? Did you take my advice at all?

9112328
It's going pretty good. I have one story that I tried to get on here (but failed to because lack of MLP content).

9112331
Did you edit any of Pirate's Life?

9112333
Oh, sorry, but I couldn't do anything to change it. It's like the one piece of schoolwork where it's bad at first and your teacher says it's bad, but you don't care and leave it be.

9112336
OK. And, word of advice, only the first chapter needs mlp content, the rest can be fine.

9112338
Of the story that failed? The first chapter is technically a prologue though.

9112340
Yes, but Prologues or introductions still need some semblance of mlp content, name drops, characters recaps of the previous story if there is one, ect. OK?

9112357
Maybe. It's much more crisp. Do a reread and edit it first, put indents where there needs to be. Then, submit and see where it goes from there.

Interesting story.

I wonder what Maul's worst fear is.

9114804
You'll see in the next chapter ;)

Huh. Maul is being unnaturally compliant with the Mane 6. It feels odd.

9225899
Don't you think it's a little suspicious?

9226542
Very much so. Something's afoot. Ahoof. Bah, ponyisms.

So maul did something that was almost good for once. Neat

Maul could not believe his eyes; the weapon was lightsaber proof!
Why would he be surprised? Canonically, vibro blades and force pikes are able to deflect a lightsaber

9277931
Yes, true. Those are saber-proof.

But this is a snake. Being used as a weapon.

9277963
Fair point, I would also be surprised to see a snake be saber resistant, but not too surprised considering how many things seem to be able to block a light saber.

Wow, a ref to the plagueis book. Good to see you well versed in your star wars

9902027
Indeed. I need to get back to writing this story. They might even be coming to Equestria.

9902048
Thank you so much. I really should get back to writing this.

I really like this story!

10946043
Yeah, you ended up replying to a comment from 10 years ago.

10946047
You're good, lol. Sure is gonna confuse a lot of people though.

Login or register to comment