I know this is just continuity for the sake of continuity, and these are all written for various speed-writing challenges, but damn it, I really want to see this idea explored much further in a more coherent story. I just love the idea of this love hexagon...type deal you've settled into.
The scene after Rainbow kicks down the door is confusing for a little while, but I get the feeling it was meant to be. The little comments about the jars of acid were brilliant. And I like your take on the changelings. What interesting... features, they have.
1114482 Yeah, I was going for the "Wait, which Rainbow Dash is Rainbow Dash?" bit entirely so I could completely subvert it with a kiss. Those jars of acid are a menace. Twilight is lucky they only dissolve one thing so there's no collateral damage. 1114823 *headtilts* now what would you want that for?
1114946 In all seriousness, you're doing a amazing job building a setting here. Things like the pancakes are just incredible. Am super jelly of your ability to hold something like together in so little time.
1115445 Drink mixers, they add that weird tangy flavor you can't get anywhere else. Just don't use the one marked people. Or the one marked shot glasses, for less dramatic but still upsetting reasons.
That was really funny, sweet, and pretty hot. Only slightly disappointed that Pinkie's the only male. But now the fun has... wow. That's gotten old already.
Also, if the perspective character was the changeling, why were they so surprised the real Dash was in the room with Twi that they knocked a door down?
Also, who added the 2nd sticker to the calander? Or was that a predestination joke?
1121763 They are not good at impersonation. I presume they just assumed the chance of Twilight just happening to be with the pony they were currently disguised as at the moment they went in was pretty low. Oh, if only they'd read the calendar. And yes, predestination joke. Twilight added it, even if she didn't know why--the maths worked out, so...
This is actually kinda sad, in its own way. Not "Oh God, you're an evil person, my eyes are flowing like a dam that was broken," kind of sad, but "Oh, the poor thing," kind of sad. Definitely had some feels.
Ha! That was good, reaaaal good. Their little group just got a fun new toy/partner.
Nice story, but I had a little trouble following which was the real one until the ending.
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Rainbow was the real one. I think. I'm not sure any of them cared.
I know this is just continuity for the sake of continuity, and these are all written for various speed-writing challenges, but damn it, I really want to see this idea explored much further in a more coherent story. I just love the idea of this love hexagon...type deal you've settled into.
I hope the changelings stay in this. I like them.
Great one! As always!
I was confused on which one was which, but I still liked the story
Oh, I like this... I loved the part where Twilight was all like, "Oh, we were just tired. We still could have kicked your butts after a quick nap." Its an interesting concept that you should totally explore more, preferably in a larger story. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Twilight_Sparkle_lolface.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Rainbow_Dash_lolface.png *hint hint* Lol.
The scene after Rainbow kicks down the door is confusing for a little while, but I get the feeling it was meant to be. The little comments about the jars of acid were brilliant.
And I like your take on the changelings. What interesting... features, they have.
I like it.
man. i love this so much.
Hold on, I've got a straw around here somewhere. Can you tilt your head to the side?
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Yeah, I was going for the "Wait, which Rainbow Dash is Rainbow Dash?" bit entirely so I could completely subvert it with a kiss.
Those jars of acid are a menace. Twilight is lucky they only dissolve one thing so there's no collateral damage.
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*headtilts* now what would you want that for?
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In all seriousness, you're doing a amazing job building a setting here. Things like the pancakes are just incredible. Am super jelly of your ability to hold something like together in so little time.
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A proper wizard is always sure to keep the jars of supernaturally specific acid stored near the things they dissolve, JUST in case.
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Well, absolutely, what purpose would they serve if they were nowhere near what they dissolved? They'd just be water then.
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Drink mixers, they add that weird tangy flavor you can't get anywhere else. Just don't use the one marked people. Or the one marked shot glasses, for less dramatic but still upsetting reasons.
Bit of an 'ead trip, this'n, but 'twas funny an' sexy enough fer me, matey!
That was really funny, sweet, and pretty hot. Only slightly disappointed that Pinkie's the only male. But now
the fun has... wow. That's gotten old already.1119137
Well, I think we'll all have to wait and see what little changeling decides to be. Maybe there'll be more.
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Cool. I like how these have a loose continuity.
Also, if the perspective character was the changeling, why were they so surprised the real Dash was in the room with Twi that they knocked a door down?
Also, who added the 2nd sticker to the calander? Or was that a predestination joke?
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They are not good at impersonation. I presume they just assumed the chance of Twilight just happening to be with the pony they were currently disguised as at the moment they went in was pretty low. Oh, if only they'd read the calendar. And yes, predestination joke. Twilight added it, even if she didn't know why--the maths worked out, so...
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Pinkie must've had a hoof in the underlying equation
This is actually kinda sad, in its own way. Not "Oh God, you're an evil person, my eyes are flowing like a dam that was broken," kind of sad, but "Oh, the poor thing," kind of sad. Definitely had some feels.