You're Always Welcome At Our House (M)

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SPark

SPark #1 · Jun 19th, 2018 · 1 · ·

VampDash

VampDash #2 · Jun 19th, 2018 · 1 · ·

Christ.

billykilly

billykilly #3 · Jun 19th, 2018 · 1 · ·

Damn!

RoyalBardofCanterlot

RoyalBardofCanterlot #4 · Jun 19th, 2018 · 1 · ·

Holy hell.

Ice Star

Ice Star #5 · Jun 19th, 2018 · 1 · ·

Oooh... I think I like this version more!

Though, is there any reason for the lack of cover art on this one?

SPark

SPark #6 · Jun 19th, 2018 · · ·

8995505
Weird, I see it as having cover art.

Edit: it did, I swear, but indeed now it does not. I cannot figure out how to upload it on my phone, though.

Ice Star

Ice Star #7 · Jun 19th, 2018 · · ·

8995550
There's none from what I can see. Perhaps it's a site bug?

SPark

SPark #8 · Jun 19th, 2018 · · ·

8995552
I think I fixed it?

Ice Star

Ice Star #9 · Jun 19th, 2018 · · ·

8995558
Yep, it is now!

FanOfMostEverything

FanOfMostEverything #10 · Jun 19th, 2018 · 1 · ·

Hmm. Honestly, I think I prefer the version that leaves matters to the reader's imagination. That said, I do like how you further characterized each Pie through their methods, especially if Marble poisoned that lemonade. Definitely an interesting chance to compare and contrast.

SPark