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Aeluna


Love dark fics? You're in the right place. I'm just your average British woman with a fascination for stories with dystopian futures and ponies. (Profile pic made by Pineapple-Nigiri on DA)

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Queen Chrysalis had won. After years of scheming and hiding in the shadows, feeding off scraps of love scavenged from innocent, oblivious passers by, she had finally succeeded in infiltrating Canterlot Castle and the city itself for her own.

Struck down by an unforseen attack, Celestia finds herself catapulted across dimensions and into a bizarre new world of magic and power. A world where she, herself, is the student.

Welcome to Twilight Sparkle's Equestria; a land where magic is might and nopony can escape the clutches of her strict and absolute rule.

Many thanks, as always, to Word Worthy for his unending support and editing skills. Coverart commissioned from Mr-Tech.

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Comments ( 34 )

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Love the idea keep up with the timely updates.
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I want to see that conversation

Hmmmm.... You have my attention

This looks interesting. I will see where it goes.

My only question is: Why? Don't get me wrong, I'm intrigued, but still, why did Chrysalis do this and this specifically?

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Essentially, she banished Celestia to another universe (as Star Swirl did to the Sirens). All will be explained in more depth later on, but for now I will say this: she has banished Celestia to another land, but no-one knows where. Admittedly she doesn't know where, either, but that is one of her trump cards; if the ponies kill Chrysalis, they'll lose the only lead they have to their princess. She does have other motives along with this, but as I say, these will be expanded upon throughout the story.

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Fair enough. So, will we be hopping back and forth between universes?

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Bah, I actually thought she'd go through with killing Celestia. instead she decides to go the pansy banishment rout.

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Sort of. I don't want to give too much away at this point, but there will be some chapters later on down the line which show the situation in Princess Celestia's Equestria.

Alright you had my interest. Now you have my attention

this world suddenly got very dark

Wow. Equestria's become.... pretty advanced with Twilight in power. Technologically at leas. Apparently Griffons are second class citizens now, and Twilight seems to be suffering from a superiority complex, at least from an outside perspective. Also, Spike is the Nightmare Moon analog. Nice.

The moment I read this description I liked it.
Then I hated it, because reasons.

Wasn't there already a story that was doing this? I remember liking and tracking it. Same premise, down to the description, but different opening.

Well now.... This went dark extremely fast...

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This is the direct rewrite of Aeluna's earlier story that you are recalling. :twilightsmile:

Oh come on, Princess Sparklebutt. Don't you know of anything else to do other than sort files and mope around and sort more files until you literally drown in paperwork unless someone has to clean up after you?

Do you know a way to take a chill pill? I know I do! I haven't seen the sun since in millions of years. So let's play video games, take some yoga classes, or go to the bowling alley even for one day. It's called a vacation, you know, a prolonged break from a job, usually known as a trip to somewhere else to chillax.

Go to a nice beachfront hotel every once in a while, o Princess of Friendship Magic. You can sit in a foldable chair on the sunset and drink a Pina Colada as you gaze upon the ocean.

Trust me, it will loosen up all that tension, and do send your student, Celestia, and her assistant suggrogate sister, Luna, a nice postcard while your at it, kay? Who knows, maybe you can make some friends, and even learn a thing or two from them.

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Glad you got all the hints! I know they weren’t exactly subtle, but still! :)

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I do believe you, sir, would probably get imprisoned in Princess Twilight’s world! :rainbowlaugh:

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Maybe she'll lighten up once her friend is back with her.

This story has a very interesting idea behind it and I can't wait to see where you take it from here!
Also griffin Luna ftw!:yay:

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You also get the slight inkling that Spike maybe the drake on the sun

Aw man. Don’t hurt Luna please!!

I bet Twilight is nice to her student. Also, that she know that Celestia isn't her Celestia.

It took me a while to figure out you rewrote this. Tracking and liking once more.

This is really cool. Hope you update some day!

Why so little chapters I don't normally read story's with Sun Tyrant but I emit you got me interested

Really love the story! Hope to see more someday.

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