Alex has escaped hell itself but his story is not over yet. For now yet another test of his will stands to strike him down and erase him entirely. Himself...
To anyone reading this, I haven't really read Zam's Alex or Xander series, and I'm curious as to what it's like. Could someone give me a general rundown and how it compares to Royal Breakup Chronicles, Cinnamon, and Absolute Power, as they're the only ones of Zam's stories that I've really read and enjoyed? I think what I like most about Zam's stories are how the princesses slowly break the will of the human, not out of hate and anger, but because they generally love him and can't bear to live without him. Alongside that, I like that fact that they break his will through love and care rather than any kind of traditional torture. The ending of the stories is also something I enjoy as the princesses eventually win in the end.
Most of all, however, all his stories have morally ambiguous characters and no real good or evil that I just really enjoy. If Alex or Xander contain elements of this, then I'd think I could enjoy it. Could someone give me a run down?
8963036 no stay please this is a great story don't leave us hanging i want to see this story to completion and have my big questions answered is he alex or xander or is he both and if he's both can he love both Luna and Cadance or be forced to choose between them
I can't help but feel that if Celestia ever TRULEY understood how much pain she caused Luna, it would break her completly and utterly. Also, it's great to have you back again, looking foward to more of your fics, if you plan to write more besides this one that is.
I know this doesn't have anything to do with this story but are you still planning on doing the immortal lover main story. Help My Lonely Soul is most definitely my favorite story on this site and the way it ends made me want more immidietly. I'm super glad your back and look forward to reading the absolute fuck out of your stories. π
I absolutely love this story and the prequels. Am I the only one who doesn't really trust Celestia anymore with the information Luna gave in the cave? I don't, she manipulated ponies that she reversed aged. Pretty messed up, and that same thing possibly happening to Alex. Can't wait for the new chapter when it comes!
I don't usually read these sorts of stories. But this one seemed a little different so I decided to give it a shot. Starting from the first story then ending here. I started out with little interest, but honestly the longer I read the more invested I got. You did a really good job on this and if possible I'd love to see it finished.
Amazing, I have never seen a Fic evolve like this, itβs just breath taking. You are really talented my friend. Are you planning on returning to this fic or do you think the spark in gone?
Zam, I'm writing this comment in hopes of reaching you in your newfound energy for writing at this moment. I know... You're juggling what feels like a million ideas, having to go back and research your past stories to seemlessly form that emotional bridge from one chapter of the past to another made recently. At the risk of sounding like an obsessed fan (which in a way i may be) I'm desperately hoping for the continuation and conclusion of this series. It's been a focal point of so much of how my life has been through marriage and loss, the inconceivable depth of an intense wolflike bonding of two beings. I can't correctly articulate the way your stories, specifically these with Alex and cadence, resonate in me, how excited I've been in even re-reading them after time had passed. Your worlds are powerful and meaningful, and by god i would donate to a Patreon if you had one, just to buy another paragraph, another chapter. In a sea of comments and the multitude of fans you already have, i offer this plea to you, as fervently as i can express through this common form of human expression called text.
Read through this entire series like 3 times already no joke. I know your working on mated for life and stuff but an update when your going to maybe finish this would be great. :(
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To anyone reading this, I haven't really read Zam's Alex or Xander series, and I'm curious as to what it's like. Could someone give me a general rundown and how it compares to Royal Breakup Chronicles, Cinnamon, and Absolute Power, as they're the only ones of Zam's stories that I've really read and enjoyed? I think what I like most about Zam's stories are how the princesses slowly break the will of the human, not out of hate and anger, but because they generally love him and can't bear to live without him. Alongside that, I like that fact that they break his will through love and care rather than any kind of traditional torture. The ending of the stories is also something I enjoy as the princesses eventually win in the end.
Most of all, however, all his stories have morally ambiguous characters and no real good or evil that I just really enjoy. If Alex or Xander contain elements of this, then I'd think I could enjoy it. Could someone give me a run down?
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You need to re-read it, but to make it short. No, the part of Luna that kept him captive was insane and wasn't the real thing, she's all better now.
Well, she's heartbroken. But she's sane.
Coulda swore you said you were done after the last story, so color me surprised that we get more awesome stories from you!
Also welcome back!
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Well I can go if you want...
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no stay please this is a great story don't leave us hanging i want to see this story to completion and have my big questions answered is he alex or xander or is he both and if he's both can he love both Luna and Cadance or be forced to choose between them
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Noooo don't do that!!
I'll take a page out of your stories and keep ya here!
Jk...or am I? Dun dun duunnn!
Error: "Does what did to me in the past not matter to you?"
It is missing she or celestia.
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Sorted, thanks XD
There's always something
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Nobody's perfect. I probably mess up more than you do. Keep up the great work. π
Happy to see that you're back into the swing of things. I've always enjoyed your take on pyscho princesses.
I can't help but feel that if Celestia ever TRULEY understood how much pain she caused Luna, it would break her completly and utterly.
Also, it's great to have you back again, looking foward to more of your fics, if you plan to write more besides this one that is.
Aw heck dude, were going in right away?
Beautiful
I wonder if it's Luna's obsession that's leaking to his mind.
Would you be kind and continue provide more horse words? I want to see where this goes.
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Of course good sir, I've been busy with work lately but I shall endeavour to have another chapter out this weekend.
this really is wonderful i cant wait to see where this goes
It's good to see you writing again.
I love the Alexander Hamilton reference! nice to see more from ya :3
cant wait to see more pages
I know this doesn't have anything to do with this story but are you still planning on doing the immortal lover main story. Help My Lonely Soul is most definitely my favorite story on this site and the way it ends made me want more immidietly. I'm super glad your back and look forward to reading the absolute fuck out of your stories. π
GET ON WITH THE IMMORTAL LOVERS QUARTET! And Afraid to Dream. It's great your posting on both sides again, so now I can nag you more!
i say have both princesses
May you please update if your not already? Plzz
2019 here asking for more content.
more please
Update please!
Love your series.
Not trying to be rude, but will this story ever continue again someday?
I absolutely love this story and the prequels. Am I the only one who doesn't really trust Celestia anymore with the information Luna gave in the cave? I don't, she manipulated ponies that she reversed aged. Pretty messed up, and that same thing possibly happening to Alex. Can't wait for the new chapter when it comes!
Please update
WE NEED AN UPDATE! STAT!!!!!!!!!!
PLEASEEE WE NEED AN UPDATE
THIS STORY SUCKS RAWWWW!!
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Son of a bitch π
I don't usually read these sorts of stories. But this one seemed a little different so I decided to give it a shot. Starting from the first story then ending here. I started out with little interest, but honestly the longer I read the more invested I got. You did a really good job on this and if possible I'd love to see it finished.
Curious to see where this goes
Amazing, I have never seen a Fic evolve like this, itβs just breath taking. You are really talented my friend.
Are you planning on returning to this fic or do you think the spark in gone?
please update soon
Zam, I'm writing this comment in hopes of reaching you in your newfound energy for writing at this moment. I know... You're juggling what feels like a million ideas, having to go back and research your past stories to seemlessly form that emotional bridge from one chapter of the past to another made recently.
At the risk of sounding like an obsessed fan (which in a way i may be) I'm desperately hoping for the continuation and conclusion of this series. It's been a focal point of so much of how my life has been through marriage and loss, the inconceivable depth of an intense wolflike bonding of two beings. I can't correctly articulate the way your stories, specifically these with Alex and cadence, resonate in me, how excited I've been in even re-reading them after time had passed. Your worlds are powerful and meaningful, and by god i would donate to a Patreon if you had one, just to buy another paragraph, another chapter. In a sea of comments and the multitude of fans you already have, i offer this plea to you, as fervently as i can express through this common form of human expression called text.
Read through this entire series like 3 times already no joke. I know your working on mated for life and stuff but an update when your going to maybe finish this would be great. :(
I re-read this series and I want mooooooooarrrrrrrrrr lol