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I was actually hoping to have it say "Meanwhile spike was on the staircase the two oblivious of his presence and he was looking dumbstruck at the awful things happening in his living room. He vomits a little in his mouth and proceeds to creep up the stairs to go finish the vomiting in his bathroom." But that right there was also fecking funny :rainbowlaugh:.

I may be biased because of my pre-existing TwiPie obsession, but this was pretty darn good!
:moustache: One moustache for the fact I don't even usually read humanized fics. :twilightblush:

Rarely have I been drawn to comment on a story, but...wow. Great craftsmanship. It flows well, the characters are in character...Great work, sorry I don't have anything constructive to say.

Poor Spike, hopefully he'll be able to sleep eventually.

DUDE! Link to the pic please? It's beautiful. And does the same artist draw more humanized ponies? Looks really good.

I this was a great story had romance and some humor. Great work:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

Very interesting! Well Done!

romanticaly funny!!!!
:moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

986727
He does lots of human pony art. Here's the lineart of that picture on his DA, I think someone else colored it though, not sure who. And thank you for the encouraging comments :pinkiehappy: This fic is only the first, I have more on the way.

Oh my Glob that last part was funny, you sir deserve a moustache :moustache:

989494
Awesome bro! Watching you. You're my new fav author! That is...if you keep writing..

Loved Spikes expression, i pictured him saying that in my head lol, priceless!:moustache:

Goddamnit, Twinkie ships are too good!!!

Lawls :rainbowlaugh: I honestly just lost sight of the whole story upon reading the end :rainbowlaugh: ahhhh, poor spike. Hearing certain things you just don't want to hear. I know that feel.

Don't worry spike! You'll understand when your older... :moustache:

Dear Celestia, I just love this two together to bits! I think my favourite part was the ending..." There's no way I'm sleeping tonight. Or ever again. Some noises can never be unheard." :rainbowlaugh:

That last bit with Spike? That was good.
Poor him was on the wrong end! Great story though! Waiting for more! :pinkiehappy:

Loved the story and the ending was priceless :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::twilightsheepish::twilightsmile::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp:

I've never really thought about Twilight/Pinkie before, but this was very well-done.

But alas for poor Spike.

Not bad.
I think the biggest flaw in this was that it progressed too fast. Pretty much everything else was good, but going from, "I didn't even know I liked girls!" to "Okay, let's bang!" was a bit much.
Though very Pinkie. :ajbemused:

Actually, the best part was the question and answer bit. That was very creative and very well done.

Dun dun duuuuuuuun!


Spike is probably now going to watch it all the time.

Comment posted by BronyLance57 deleted Jun 16th, 2013

I couldn't resist loving this piece!
:heart:
Hard to find good Twinkie, thanks so much!
:pinkiehappy: :twilightsheepish:

"No, Pinkie, I was just thinking about my parents."
"... Ew."
"Not like that!"

BEST DIALOG EVER <3

xDD I laughed so hard..

gosh I love this story :rainbowlaugh:

Nice story, I'm looking forward to more

I like this new style of shorts as well as the direction this is going. I remember the previous version looked like it was going to be some crazy drama and then it stopped. This format is much more fun.

Dear Princess Celestia,
There's no way I'm sleeping tonight. Or ever again. Some noises can never be unheard.
Your faithful student's disturbed assistant, Spike.

Pretty much had me rolling around in laughter. Poor spike... I can only imagine what he would have thought walking up to that on the first night...

2729678 Thanks! That was my exact feelings on it, actually. I prefer writing more lighthearted, fluffy things... the way this originally was, it wasn't really enjoyable to write anymore. Fun is what I'm here for, and I'm glad I'm not the only one who wasn't very into the original :twilightsmile:

I love this fic but because of the "word" ambidexlicious, you have forced my hand to post this:
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I'll be honest; I think humanized things take away from the MLP appeal for me. The fact that they are horses and not humans is the best part of the franchise, I feel. Granted, if I could meet a human girl like Fluttershy, my life would be sooo wonderful...:heart:

Where was I?

Anyway, that having been said, this is a wonderful story on its own merit, pony or not, and I gladly give you an upvote! :twilightsmile:

Humanized fics? Yeah, alright. I'm in.

2730375
If that were to happen to me, I couldn't ask for anything else! I'd love a girl who's like Fluttershy, or like Pinkie :pinkiesmile:

2730629

A girl like Pinkie might be fun in bed, but Shy seems like she'd be the kind of girl who I could spend my life with.

2730375 I agree that the fact that they are ponies is one of the things that makes the show great, and the franchise wouldn't be the same or have the same appeal for me if they had started off as humans. But I also don't ship them as ponies. I just feel like they aren't meant to be sexualized as they are in the show... That's just my preference, and I know many people don't share it, though I'm glad you liked the story itself, if not the humans :twilightsmile:

Dio

So if Pinkie's party wasn't successful...how did she get her cutie mark?

Unless they don't have cutie marks as humans in your universe.

But then what was the Sonic Rainboom doing? It looks like the events of Cutie Mark Chronicles still happened. What did they talk about then? How did she get the party balloon cutie mark if not at the rock farm party? I'M CONFUSED!!! *punches hole in the wall, buckles down and starts sobbing*

2734316 Haha, settle down, settle down! There's a lot of things that I don't address in my story, just cuz it doesn't fit in anywhere. Cutie marks, using magic without horns, wings... probably other things... But you're asking about cutie marks, so here's the explanation for that one.

They don't exist, though the whole magical aspect of everyone having a destiny does exist. Like with cutie marks, they find out what it is one day, but they don't get a mark. The events of the original Cutie Mark Chronicles did happened in this universe, and Pinkie realized her destiny at that point, even though her parents disapproved. She had to hide her calling from them though, and she ended up moving mostly because she couldn't bring joy or smiles to anyone, and that was horrible for her.

I hope that helps :twilightsheepish:

you sir deserve a moustache! :moustache: in fact you deserve two!!:moustache:

Good stuff, liking the new format :twilightsmile:
:moustache:

2730375
well i think there are two kinds who read fanfiction here.
The ones who come for the Pony, and the ones who come for the characters.
You seem like you come for the Ponys, thus you have problems with humanized.
I'm for the characters, thus i have problems with OCs.

Sir I find this story a little confusing...? as you had three chapters out relative to the same story, but have a completely different chapter out now that is unrelated to the story and erased the other parts as to clear up my confusion may I ask why?

Your Regards

OnTheTrot

Like number 230 also that last part priceless

2786015 Woo, look at all those thumbs :pinkiegasp: Thank you!

I was expecting Spike to see them and start having a nosebleed. XD
But the last bit made me laugh my ass off.

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