As Twilight Sparkle slowly floats into the air, magic beams lance out from her horn striking around the room randomly so much so that everypony misses Dawn's own horn flare to life with wild magic.
A lance of purple magic strikes the instructors causing them to float as well as being knocked unconscious by the overwhelming magical pressure.
A massive beam strikes out at the Dragon egg from the test, releasing a brilliant purple and white flash which then reveals the egg was hatched. Though as the newly born drake looks up to the floating lavender filly another bolt of lavender magic strikes him causing the drakeling to grow in size rapidly. Quickly outgrowing the cart that his egg was brought in on, soon the drakes head reaches the ceiling before it easily overpowered the wards that were to contain wild magic, now with a large hole in the roof provided by the now massive dragon.
Dozens of lavender flares of magic begin darting out of the room through the hole, acting much like fireworks.
The other beam strikes the filly's parents rendering them as nothing more than potted plants, the beam missing Dawn by a very small margin as the filly had taken several steps towards her sister.
Dawn's luck however soon runs out as another fairly large beam of magic strikes her, causing her barely controlled magic to be pushed over causing her to Surge as well.
Canterlot Royal Gardens
Celestia POV
As Celestia enjoys her mid-morning tea and cake, a ritual that no being has ever dared to interrupt is startled when a rainbow wave of light(and magic) races across the sky following a loud Boom of something breaking the sound barrier. Though she is surprised it mostly comes from witnessing such a rare event as a sonic rainboom.
As the rainbow fades from view, Celestia raises her teacup up to her lips when she is startled for a second time by the roof at her School for Gifted Unicorns explodes as a massive dragon's head rises into the sky. Seconds later Celestia is hit by a massive wave of magical pressure, causing her levitation spell on the teacup to give out, the sure sign of somepony having a magical surge. Celestia realizes that she will need to intervene because as soon as she realized what was going on another wave threatened to send Celestia to the ground as another powerful pony begins to surge. Quickly trotting towards her School Celestia begins to hope she arrives in time as a surge as big as the two she can feel usually results in the pony's death.
Wow we just got to chapter two
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Well I didn't and still don't have much of anything planned for before the Exam, I may add more later if I can get around to writing it. But like I said this is meant to show Momylestia with filly Twilight but doubled! So I need to get to where Celestia and the girls have interactions with each other. That's when I hope to really take off.
Also got any suggestions for stuff leading up to the Exam? It would go along way in getting me to write more stuff for before I introduce Tia
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1. I meant look at how many chapters are before chapter two
And 2. I don't know ask pinkie pie to ask dawn and twilight what happened... but I can say this, DON'T FORGET MURPHY'S LAW
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I'll give you that, but look at how long each is. I just can't find a way to put them together that I like. Also I tried but Pinkie said
No spoilers!
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Umm you could just do a normal transition all wrighters do
if you want a bit more before celestia comes just break the shows canon a little more and have their magic do a bit more (during their magic surge), and you can add moments where they had magic surges that where just random events that happened during their foalhood (before the exam)
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Well first that would be to easy and second what few of those events I have I have for their time with Celestia. Thus why I keep asking for people's suggestions for more events that I can expand upon.
8974522
Well heres something you should know about me, I suck at wrighting stories and giving ideas. (There's a reason I don't have any stories posted on this website)
8974549
Hey how would you feel if I told you the next chapter will be the longest yet (over 1500 words!) and its ready to go? I am feeling a little like a troll and don't know if I should post it now or put it up tomorrow.(it being 22:02 right now for me, meaning I'll probably wait until the morning to post it though I'll do it sooner with more responses)
How about this if I can get 5 positive and constructive comments on this before the night is out I will post it. Also if you don't have any suggestions to improve or fix the story tell me what you like or your favorite part.
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Ooooh a nice long chapter, and also here's something (not so) constructive: Keep up the good work, I couldn't find anyway to criticize this other than saying that you need to post longer chapters. (Especially for who don't have a lot of patience)
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Hey even though they're short at least I have kept putting more out, though granted that still means quicker read throughs. The problem is that I can only write when I'm exhausted, also if you go read my other story and compare it to this one. Well the other story is what happened when I was thinking it out with a plan and outline and all that stuff they told me about in school. This story aside from the roughest idea, such as a human male is born as Twilight Sparkle's twin sister and has Adorkable moments with Celestia, I've been winging it....
That was just terrible it was just so cheesy
Oh come on I'm allowed to be cheesy.....
Cause I'm from Wisconsin!
You just made everypony dumber with that
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OK 1. Twilight, that was far from the worst joke ive heard in my relatively short life. (The worst is my brothers out-of-context puns)
And 2. I would rather wait a week for a long and edited chapter then wait a day (or two) for a chapter with a few hundred words that I will have to read again later anyways because you've edited it
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I know I know it's annoying for readers it's just that like I said, also from all the responses I've gotten so far I am trying to get the most out in the shortest time, I mean my last story got less than 5 comments and until I put this one out only had a hundred views. So I've been erratically sporadic from being so elated from the popularity of this. Also the only chapters I've edited were some of the originals that even I felt were rocky story wise. I mean imagine what you would be like if you wrote a story expecting it to sink like a rock, but get so much attention as this story has?
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I don't know I'm a reader not a wrighter... although I have had some inspiration for some stories I've just never had the creative drive to actually wright them. (It's like I'm on a permanent wrighters block)
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Exactly so I wrote the first chapters as soon as they came to me and published them as soon as I could, cause I fear I will catch writer's block or I will lose that creative drive.
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Oh and I lack motivation for anything that requires me to do things (homework, chores, ect.)
Keep workin on those longer chapters. You’ll get better at writing. Try bouncing ideas of other writers or artists.