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This story is a sequel to A Glimmer of the Past
Having embraced her inner foal for a number of months, Starlight's ageplayer side has been accepted by her mentor, childhood friend, and best friend.
But when she hears that her dad is visiting Ponyville, she begins to wonder, and fear, that he may be the source of these desires.
Warning: Contains ageplay, diapers, diaper usage, and age regression.
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Ooh, here we go!
Sorry
Good start can't wait for the next chapter I wonder if Starlight is going to turn herself back into a child again . I hope you will be able to update again soon please.
Yep! Starting off as good as the previous tale had left off. You certainly are quite skilled as an author. The visuals are quite nice along with the insights into the characters' feelings.
I wondered what you'd do given how the Sire's Hollow episode changed the name, and some background, for Starlight. I'd say you adapted well without making much worry about how your original head canon was altered by show canon. Nice.
It'll be interesting to see how Starlight does react to her dad in this story. Your previous tale, the episode, and this one do align nicely to make a lot of believable points. Nothing forced nor too much out of character. :)
Looking forward to more.
So, how long until Starlight either tells Firelight, or Firelight finds out for himself? One or the other is bound to happen.
I've gotta admit, I'm really excited to see where this goes.
Keep up the good work!
Nice job building the tension for the next chapter. The back story of how Starlight first found herself getting her foolish supplies was very well written and painted a great "How did it begin?" moment. Kind of makes you think that new insecurities started to make their way into Starlight after Twilight said she had graduated. Graduation is a time of 'growth' and 'moving on'. Twilight is basically saying, "You're on your own." without actually meaning to say it in such a way. This could easily rekindle her desire to want to be cared for.
This also makes you go back to why she started Our Town. All the ponies basically took care of her and she took care of them. She was safe in knowing they'd always be there with them until Twilight and friends took them away. However, instead of diapers at this time, her mind was too full of desire for revenge for having her haven removed.
Definitely thought out work here. Nice job.
Hm, didn't take much for Starlight to decide to show off her foalish side to her dad. Now the question is, how will he react?
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My guess is shock.
The tension continues as we get more flashbacks. Each chapter really builds to getting us ever closer to her dad learning her 'secret' along with seeing how the revelation will impact both Fire Light and Starlight.
Perhaps dad will have some interesting things to share, too? Maybe some things he remembers about Starlight's foalhood that could even further make sense of everything?
9033505 Maybe something about her mother, or the fact that Starlight was a latch-key filly. Those could be contributing factors to her desire to feel young and cared for.
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Don't you hate it when that happens!
Not sure what you mean here. As far as I know, Starlight's name and background weren't altered at all during "The Parent Map." The most background on her that we got in that episode was the fact that she went through an emo stage during her teen years after Sunburst left. This comic unfortunately makes things much, much worse! The worst thing about it is that this is totally realistic and believable.
I personally think this would have been better had we gotten to see Starlight struggling to come to this decision of showing her father her foalish side. But, then again, that's just my opinion.
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Well obviously, Starlight is willing to let herself be babied by her dad again. The only question is, how far will he go? Will he be content to have her just act like a foal, or will he actually want to regress her and care for her like an actual foal again?
You've already taken it into a great direction. You used a lot of perfect show refs to explain why Starlight is where she is along with some quality head canon as to why Starlight's mom is not around.
I wonder if you could have her use her age spell, the one she used on herself and Sunburst, to have her be little again to spend a day with her dad? She could also use magic to resize the diapers, too. They could then go about Ponyville doing those things a father and daughter would naturally do.
Perhaps this suggestion will help Fire Light catch up on times he wishes he could've gotten back with Starlight while Starlight herself is comfortable indulging on a more realistic blast to the past?
The story is really good.
Don’t worry about how long it will take to come up with new ideas for the story. Just take your time to think of a few ideas, maybe read stories to inspire you. I’m sure you’ll find out how you want this story to go in time.
And then Starlight realised she was still padded.
Bum, Bum, Bummmmmmm
So far Firelight seems to be taking it well. But I have to wonder what would happen if he decided he wanted to take Starlight out in public?
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It depends on if they're both comfortable with exhibitionism.
Which doesn't apply here.
Nicely done. The chapters starting with the flashbacks to the first time she allowed herself to explore this particular part of herself are just as interesting as the main story itself. Most definitely feels like you are getting two tales for the reading of one. :)
It will be neat to see where you may go next. Perhaps to visit some places that Fire Light had always wanted to take Starlight to as a foal? It really is a great chance to make up for so much lost time.
Any spanking in this like the last one?
9089158 I don't think so, he hasn't listed in the warnings. It would be interesting to see what might prompt Firelight to do such a thing, or how Starlight would react to such a punishment from her father who most likely was never involved in punishing her as an actual foal (the responsibility likely fell to Stellar Flare if Firelight was always away or unable to be a parent).
Hm, wonder what's going to happen from here.
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My guess is that they’ll talk more about it or something like that.
Nice continuation. The story has a smooth pace as we explore the past and present with bits of in-between being added to increase all the 'what if' situations.
You certainly found a nice way to say a lot by saying little. Nicely done. :)
Shortest chapter yet!? Well dang.
If you want to end it here I suppose you can, though I think it would be interesting if she went to Sires' Hollow, regressed, and Stellar Flare stumbled upon her. I imagine that might bring back some memories.
Stories of less than 10,000 words are just fine. Especially if the content is, as in this story, relevant to not only the potential situation with Starlight and her dad but those who may also read it.
Truly I compliment you on inserting lines like, "Accepting this side of yourself" and "Sharing that part of yourself". Those broke the 4th wall in ways that help those who live with such feelings know there can be acceptance and understanding for desiring a return to simpler times.
Good luck with class. I'll be keeping a watch for your next tale, or chapter. :)
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Oh I'm not a student.
I deal with hungry students.
And drunk, hungry students.
And stoned, hungry students.
...And carpools of hungry students.
Really built up the tension. As in the original, nice work with the psychological aspects.
"...You still wet the bed? Sweetie, maybe you should get a doctor."
"..Sure, Dad. That's EXACTLY what I'm trying to tell you."
Awww.
this story is getting good and by the way brony on and bro hoof
quite interesting
short and sweet chapter