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I was wondering if this story was dead or not. Glad to see there is still a pulse.
Hmmm .... I like the story 7/10 would've been a 8... But the remorse chapter part about celestia having a kid with thor ... from avengers ..... was like ugggggggh. Hand to face dissapointed. (Plus that means sunsets would be a 1000 years old or celestia cheated on her herd. Ill explain what i mean. if Luna was banging Freyja but got banished before having a kid while celestia was banging thor. That means shes 1000 years old. I highly doubt thor was in the herd with celestia velvet and her stallion considering sunset and shining are roughly the same age since sunset was in csgu and knew cadance in the castle. It implies she cheated on the herd stallion by getting knocked up by another male outside the herd while in the herd. Was her stallion not good enough and then she changed him into a mare and knocked him up which is fd up. I hope he atleast gets to get velvet pregnant. I'm guessing she cleared fluttershy with the rest of the herd as a lover.) I expect twilight to be the multidimensional traveler. Having anyone else from her dimension doing it just cheapens the story immersion. Picking a foreign universe god to boot instead of a equestrian god just adds salt to the wound. Would it really of been so bad to make a local earth pony god of fire. Im hoping for more chapters but im not kidding that almost made me quit the story. No offense. I like the story like i said and will keep reading but if more weirdness like that happens I just wouldn't be able to keep reading. Even now I can't stop thinking ... Thor really thor oh god why.
I'm wondering how much longer the Star Trek arc will be.
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Just going to say that the thor thing was much later than Luna’s daliances with freyja and sunset was conceived during an orgy with the herd as a whole so no Celestia didn't cheat and yes Fluttershy is being brought in to the herd as a whole so she's got permission. And no the mare part was Lucent's idea.
As for why thor? Well it's simple really the asgardian gods are canon Multiversal travellers sure they usually stick to their nine realms but that doesn't preclude them going to others, they're kinky as fuck just look up how sleipnir was born(a hint loki was his mother), also its reference to a friends fic. And don't worry Sunset is not going to go an a multi versal travel and neither is thor. I will however say the only reason Twilight got sent anywhere was chrysalis casting a spell implying yes others can be sent elsewhere. But that wont be happening not in this fic.
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It's almost finished a chapter or three at most.
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Yes, it's alive.
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Its your story but having luna and celestia be with multiversal gods was just out to left field it in my opinion sunset needing a divine father at all was pointless it felt like you put it in their just to fill in 300 words of nonsense to go against norm seriously what stallion would let another male impregnate his mare... an orgy is one thing but getting one of your mates pregnant from someone outside the herd ...that's like telling your mate his seed isn't worthy so I slept with another guy but I'll turn you into a mare and put my seed in you because my seeds more worthy in you then yours in me. Plus she hides it from the kids their related ...why. Any real stallion would've bucked thor in the d*ck..... In the d*ck for trying to impregnate his mate it's guy 101 right their. Plus if you were gonna choose a Norse god himdal was way more a better choice. Calm collected wise he stood guard over bifrost protected alot of civilians from hel ....while you got thor the battle crazed neaderthal jock who likes fighting and partying you'll never convince me he's good father material.
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I think you're reading way more into this than you need to, and projecting monogamous and monoamorous related concepts on a polygamous and polyamorous society. And I should point out that celestia is the stallion of the herd not Lucent, there is a reason he chose to be a mare even if temporarily.
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But at the time of thor was he a mare I get the impression no ... since shining came after sunset. Plus polygamy and open relationships are two different things. Polygamous means that their in a set relationship with multiple partners a one night stand or orgy with a god passing through your dimension doesnt make him part of the relationship. The stallion should be pissed celestia didn't wanna carry his child that should bother any self respecting male instead she got knocked up by someone during an orgy who wouldn't stick around. Leaving him to raise someone elses child. Did lucent even get any of his mares pregnant or was he turned into a mare and made pregnant. Theirs a difference mindset being a man over being a woman. Even changing their genders with magic shouldnt change that whether shes the stallion or a mare of the herd inside shes still a mare like hes a stallion on the inside. Shining better tell cadance she's getting pregnant first by him otherwise she's probably gonna justify sleeping around with some god forcing him to raise the child if she gets him pregnant first. It's like males in your story love getting their wives cuckold by other males.
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Did you entirely miss the part where I said that Lucent isn't the stallion of the herd. Was I not clear enough? If that's the case, Lucent is bi but he prefers to be on the receiving end of a good dicking, not the giver. He doesn't want to sire any foals, and doesn't want to be a stallion, it's the main reason he had a vesectomy. The only reason he is still a stallion is that gender swap spell is temporary and there is no permanent one(yet).
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Hahaha good to know all this background info unavailable till now. My statements were made from the available info provided inside the story. Your justifying your comments with info unavailable that your telling us now. See who knew he was bi ... But that still makes him the male of the herd ... celestias the alpha I think is what your looking for... she's only a male when she grows a d*ck. Hes only a female when he loses his. But im gonna drop this conversation....its not really gonna change anything. Plus it sounds like your getting pissed.
Edit: it's funny you might not remember but we've had a ethics discussion before in the story guided by the light I think it was. I called the main character a evil murderer for killing a innocent dragon. We went back and forth a few times in that one two.
Neokiva, you are a glorious god/goddess....
We are not worthy of your glorious presence
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Not sure if this is sincere or not.
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I am the definition of sincere
Yes it updated thank you
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fixed, don't know how it depublished.
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Yay
Good chapter Neo looking forward to the next one.
Well its good to see a update finally after so long. Was hoping that you would have continued the story. Still a favorite. I did enjoy you including the Overlord element into the story, it gave Twilight the push she needed to make her powerful and break the rules. Some will say, she is overpowered, but not me. I do have a suggestion, when you finally have Twilight return back home, you should change her Alicorn appearance, to include more dragon elements, if you ever see dragon girl fan art, it should give an idea of what to do with Twilight, as at her core, she is now a dragon. So I could see her Alicorn appearance to replace her tail and wings with dragon-like tail and wings, and dragon-like scales running down her back, and her hoofs being more dragon-like claws.
any idea when we can expect an update and new chapter?
Looking forward to the next chapter
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I know this is an old comment but it reminds me of an artwork I had commissioned a while back. Of a twidragon. images-wixmp-ed30a86b8c4ca887773594c2.wixmp.com/f/0917ee7e-09b0-40b7-a885-483172b8c05f/d8ar6ke-4bdeb106-a99c-480f-a3cb-3c2e113e2816.png/v1/fill/w_1107,h_722,q_70,strp/twidragon_by_artwork_tee_d8ar6ke-pre.jpg?token=eyJ0eXAiOiJKV1QiLCJhbGciOiJIUzI1NiJ9.eyJzdWIiOiJ1cm46YXBwOjdlMGQxODg5ODIyNjQzNzNhNWYwZDQxNWVhMGQyNmUwIiwiaXNzIjoidXJuOmFwcDo3ZTBkMTg4OTgyMjY0MzczYTVmMGQ0MTVlYTBkMjZlMCIsIm9iaiI6W1t7ImhlaWdodCI6Ijw9MTA0NCIsInBhdGgiOiJcL2ZcLzA5MTdlZTdlLTA5YjAtNDBiNy1hODg1LTQ4MzE3MmI4YzA1ZlwvZDhhcjZrZS00YmRlYjEwNi1hOTljLTQ4MGYtYTNjYi0zYzJlMTEzZTI4MTYucG5nIiwid2lkdGgiOiI8PTE2MDAifV1dLCJhdWQiOlsidXJuOnNlcnZpY2U6aW1hZ2Uub3BlcmF0aW9ucyJdfQ.duSa7bFhGAoLqCuWRUouVOT-JqEBZp6yUbZj-RtnJpU
Have you abandoned this story or are you just to busy to write a response, because it has been a while since we have heard from you about the progress of this story?
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I've been busy writing an original story a light novel and that's been my main focus for a while. But that doesn't mean I have dropped it.
Twilight has certainly grown more powerful lol. Is this in the "Badass Twilight = Total Domination" group? I like these kind of fics.
Plz update
nice more please and if your looking for any new worlds try code geass
What color is she wearing? Yellow/Blue/Red
Any new for the next update?
Hope you update this soon it's a good story
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Twilight is engineer and csia is science/medical.
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so Yellow and Blue okay
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So here I am about a year or so later when the story starts updating again and I find this old message from myself.
I forgot I even wrote that message and it feels super weird now.