After an accident involving Twilight Sparkle and Rainbow Dash, a confused mare wakes up in an Equestria she doesn't recognize. Set on finding out what happened after the failed experiment, she plunges herself into the grim streets of Canterlot.
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I shall give this a read.
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I think this is one of the alternate timelines caused by Starlight Glimmer's time travel, the one where Sombra retook control of the Crystal Empire and turned the crystal ponies into his unwilling soldiers. Celestia was on the frontlines in that war, so it makes sense she might get killed.
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I hope you enjoy.
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8804977
It all will be explained later in the story, no spoilers now . However, I can say that it is not alternative timeline created by intervention from Starlight Glimmer, and though it was original concept of story, but me and Geka decided to diverge from it a little.
Ooh, I like it. Simply not enough Pony cyberpunk around.
Great imagery and solid flow but I noticed there's a few missing spaces scattered here and there.
On a side note, the first chapter had a Metal Gear Solid feel while the second one has a Neuromancer/Ghost in the Shell atmosphere.
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Oh, thank you very much for your kind words - it means world to me!
Sorry if it lacks quality in some places - it's mine and Geka's first attempt at writing fanfiction and it is also written in not our native language. Just give us some time and we will improve, I swear!
I have not read this yet but I can’t wait to do so
For now I must sleep
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I hope you enjoy!
Seems pretty good! Definitely going to be reading. The artwork is a nice touch too!
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Thanks! I hope you won't be disappointed.
And I'll pass your kind words to Geka, he be glad to hear it too.
Yup, this is as good as I hoped it would be!
Yeah there are mistakes here and there like you said but I’m no good at pointing those out for you, sorry.
But those won’t keep me from enjoying this story.
Hope you keep posting, this story is amazing!
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Glad to hear that!
In time, I will improve my writing, I swear.
And I'm sure will keep posting - the second chapter is already finished and undergoes editing process right now. Overall, we have the whole story planned, so it is only question of time.
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Oh, that is all great news to hear! Thanks for the heads up.
Holy crap this story is looking amazing! Ambiguous, detailed, intriguing, this is looking to be quite the cyberpunk tale! Gonna read chapter 2 now!